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Santa and Rudolph Amazed - POTD -

Cold night and with the breeze, leaves were swinging, 
Santa and Rudolph stopped puzzled they heard 
From a small chapel, children were singing
Carols for Yuletide, such lovely each word.

Santa and Rudolph stopped puzzled they heard 
On that hill everywhere covered with snow
Carols for Yuletide, such lovely each word.
A graceful star from high they saw it glow.

On that hill everywhere covered with snow
The bells rang but they remembered the boys,
A graceful star from high they saw it glow.
Santa had to transport to all, his toys.

The bells rang but they remembered the boys,
From a small chapel, children were singing
Santa had to transport to all, his toys.
Cold night and with the breeze, leaves were swinging,
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024


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Date: 1/14/2024 5:56:00 AM
Back with congratulations on your poem. Way to go. Thanks for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Date: 1/7/2024 9:27:00 AM
Happy for your POTD. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/5/2024 8:43:00 AM
Sorry to be late with my congratulations, Victor. I'm truly happy for your potd.
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Date: 1/4/2024 2:07:00 AM
Wonderful poetry, Victor. Glad to see you. Hope you are feeling better, my friend. Happy New Year. Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 1/3/2024 7:26:00 PM
I understand how Santa and Rudolph feel. Music leaves me in complete awe as well. Your thoughts bring a smile to my heart. Congratulations Victor, on Poem of the Day. May best to you. Happy New Year. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 1/3/2024 7:04:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD, dear Victor!
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Date: 1/3/2024 6:57:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD, Victor. A very worthy winner. I hope you are feeling much better and that the new year brings improved health and happiness to you. Look after yourself, Victor. Thank you for your kind comment. Old Duck.
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Date: 1/3/2024 6:40:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD dear Victor . Glad to see your heart and pen at work bringing us this open window into the winter wonderland Christmas spirit. You paint wonderful enticing scenes we readers get to become a part of ! So glad you are feeling better. Happy 2024 to you . Big hugs, Susan :)
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Date: 1/3/2024 5:11:00 PM
This is so sweet! I wish I could have read it before Christmas, but happily, I am still awaiting a visit from a daughter and her family, so it gives me the belated Christmas spirit I need as I leave up the Christmas tree! Santa has retired to the North Pole for a well-deserved rest you know, so I will have to make do! I'm thinking about those grandbabies, three boys and their little sister, all counting on Grammy to have a fun second Christmas for them! Thank you, this lifts me to the occasion!
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 1/3/2024 9:50:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD Victor, how did I miss this fact?! A well-deserved win for sure!
Date: 1/3/2024 2:48:00 PM
Congratulations, Dear Victor, on this delightful, perfectly flowing poem! Reading such a festive poem is a treat for the heart!
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Date: 1/3/2024 2:12:00 PM
I'm back with delighted congratulations on POTD. Way to go, Victor! :)
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Date: 1/3/2024 12:53:00 PM
Dear Victor you have put a lot of warmth in this harsh winter.. brought a tremendous joy into the hearts.. spread the seeds of Love and beauty within your words.. evoked the power of festivities to spread peace and Love into the universe.. Immensely delighted to read Your amazing poetry! Belated merry Christmas and Happy New Year! Congratulations on your POTD honour! A well deserved recognition! God bless your beautiful soul.
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/3/2024 1:08:00 PM
Hello Besma!
Date: 1/3/2024 9:34:00 AM
Wow you got a POTD. Big congrats, Victor. I looked but didn't see a soupmail from you..
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 1/3/2024 10:40:00 AM
Not a soupmail but an email.
Date: 1/3/2024 8:12:00 AM
Back with congratulations on POTD. Well deserved.
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Date: 1/3/2024 8:06:00 AM
"On that hill everywhere covered with snow Carols for Yuletide, such lovely each word. A graceful star from high they saw it glow." -- Lovely poetry, Victor. Perfect! Congratulations!
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Date: 1/3/2024 7:53:00 AM
Victor it's good to see you are back. Hope you are feeling better now. Congratulations on your POTD! Wishing you all the best and health in the new year. Hugs
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Date: 1/3/2024 7:46:00 AM
Dear Victor, welcome back, its so good to see you back here and receiving POTD too, well deserved, and as for the poem it is so magical and so ethereal how you’ve woven words here in such a captivating manner. I especially love the line “ A graceful star from high they saw it glow.” So cosmic and so beautiful how you’ve painted imagery throughout! Happy new year and i hope this year brings you all that your heart desires
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Date: 1/3/2024 7:18:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on your POTD, Victor. Enjoy your special day of recognition, my friend. Bill
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Date: 1/3/2024 7:04:00 AM
- A wonderful Christmas poem, Victor - Congratulations on your well-deserved p.o.t.d. :) - Happy New Year, my friend :) - hugs
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Date: 1/3/2024 6:38:00 AM
Back with BIG congrats on POTD, Victor. Enjoy your special day, today.
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Date: 1/3/2024 6:32:00 AM
Dear Victor, what a joy to wish you many congratulations on this absolutely delightful and enchanting POTD. It’s so lovely and flows impeccably with the refrains. So perfect for the season. Please keep writing when you can as it brings such happiness when reading your amazing poetry. Hope you are having a good, celebratory day. Blessings to you :)
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Date: 1/3/2024 5:58:00 AM
A delightful, heart warming read ~ warmest congratulations on POTD, dear Victor
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Date: 1/3/2024 5:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A creative/fun write. Santa/Rudolph sure stay busy. Now for a much needed vacation for them. Have a great/blessed New Year. Write more in 24.........................
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Date: 1/3/2024 4:33:00 AM
Oh wow, this is such a beautiful creation, dear Victor.. This really brings the magic, joy and soulful emotions of Christie to the surface.. How Santa and Rudolph remembered those boys singing so sweetly with pure glee.. You've woven this impeccably, with wonderful rhymes and refrains.. Flowing together so gorgeously! An amazing poem.. Well-deserved for POTD, heartiest congratulations to you on receiving this honour. Sending my best wishes to you for the New Year as well, keep writing ~ :)
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Date: 1/3/2024 4:10:00 AM
Hi Victor, You paint a lovely picture with your words. Congratulations on this POTD.
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