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Salute To the Rain

I would like to start out In an innocent sort of way, Pointing out an instance Of a time far away. It is not tangible Nor blunt to be seen. It can not be snagged on a Timeline. Nor condensed, except inside a Dream. It is brightly beautiful A testimony, how to be. Burning, ever so slightly In an ever burning kettle you see. Taut at its points Grows tighter-Oh how it bends! This dream, a fantastic nightmare, Will it ever end? Festival of the curious, festival of the damned Broken at limbs, torn at our joints How then will it mend?

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Date: 1/24/2018 2:50:00 AM
hmmm intriguing. Festival of the Curious, kind of reminds me of Hermann Hesse's "Steppenwolf". Dark...
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Date: 1/23/2018 11:32:00 AM
Hi SF, just read ur blog so thought to visit ur page, and wow, I like ur style. This is such a journey of a poem. Nice.
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Date: 1/23/2018 10:17:00 AM
Love your expressiveness---young minds work more freely---I started writing in grade school and I'm 70 today--WOW--hon, check line 15 (did you mean taut)
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Date: 1/23/2018 11:50:00 AM
Probably, meant to go back to this one and never did- haha.

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