sails in the harbor

When you see a white sail in the harbor of Brest,
A sail under a burning sun,	
It’s a nagging sail,
She has not the tranquility of a sail on the Nile,
Her mind is not at peace, her conscience torments her,
This sail flees life; it does not enjoy life,
So are most of the things we like 
In This country.


Quand vous voyez une voile blanche dans la rade de Brest,
Une voile sous un soleil ardent,	
C’est une voile agaçante,
Elle n’a pas la tranquillité d’une voile sur le Nil,
Son esprit n’est pas en paix, sa conscience la tourmente,
Cette voile fuit la vie, elle n’en profite pas,
Il en est ainsi de la plupart des choses que nous aimons 
En ce pays.
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Rodrigues Avatar
August 15, 2024 at 8:37 PM
Sobering, my friend!
Anaya Avatar
August 11, 2024 at 6:37 PM
Perhaps the white sail reminds you of surrender. "Cette voile fuit la vie, elle n’en profite pas" sounds so beautiful in French Yann.
Faure Avatar
August 6, 2024 at 10:34 AM
So well written thanks for posting!
Rolland Avatar
August 11, 2024 at 3:23 AM
Thank you so much Joyce for stopping by
Dietrich Avatar
August 5, 2024 at 9:46 PM
So interesting. So are you a French poet as well, or do you translate french poems? (or maybe it's not French I am seeing)
Rolland Avatar
August 5, 2024 at 11:31 PM
Thanks Andrea for stopping by, my first language is french, so i write poems in french, then i translate to post on Poetry soup, i think it is good for the brain, not going old too soon, i am retired from school teacher since five years, thanks a lot for your interest
Rose  Avatar
August 3, 2024 at 3:25 PM
May she choose to sail in quiet waters that give life, after this ordeal she needs to set sail in wholesome sea spaces, nice entry, gl dear Yann
Rolland Avatar
August 5, 2024 at 11:33 PM
thank you so much Rose, for the very clever comment, it is enlightening for everyone i think, enjoyed
Buhagiar Avatar
August 3, 2024 at 1:26 AM
Your country is in turmoil. Loved your metaphor.
Rolland Avatar
August 6, 2024 at 12:34 AM
people are i think, thanks for stopping by
Buehler Avatar
August 2, 2024 at 9:46 PM
Inner turmoil can spoil the best of experiences. I enjoyed the English version of your lovely poem, and practicing French with the second version, Yann. Thank you for sharing. :)
Rolland Avatar
August 6, 2024 at 12:35 AM
thanks evelyn, for the comprehensive and precious comment, enjoyed
George Avatar
August 2, 2024 at 5:38 AM
Dear Yaan, I don't know why you dislike seeing white sails in the sea. Probably you have some bad associations with them. Powerfully expressed.
Rolland Avatar
August 6, 2024 at 12:36 AM
thannks valsa, may be you are right, i could be tormented or frustrated, seeing sails on the horizon
Kendrick Avatar
August 2, 2024 at 2:23 AM
Yann, most people I think are constantly fleeing life in their minds while they are supposed to be working at something. Thanks for sharing this revealing work with us. Sara K
Rolland Avatar
August 6, 2024 at 12:38 AM
so right sandra, this is related to work, they flee i guess, it take time to be quiet and serene, enjoyed your comment
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