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Sabbath Morning Rap Sequence 1

Learn not too late to halt the hate, Bound to be ground in the dust of disgust We're pierced and fierce, fulla rings and things We're blued and tatooed and God is booed. Crude dudes are misconstrued with actions vulgar,vile and lewd. We're found down ground in sound, totally tatooed in terrible taste, in a mindless race for the loudest base. Hate to dis your myth but God exists, 'Tis a truth deduced by the less obtuse, You understand He did become man For His love of us all because of the fall. He suffered and died being crucified, He pulled His people from the pains of hell and rose from the dead He's alive and well, I tell you no lie He's got no rival, It's right there written in the holy Bible. He arose to heaven so to send the Spirit to His brothers and sisters who wished to hear it, He said I leave you my Love I leave you my all but you gotta say yes to heed my call. Don't follow the world that ain't the place, You want to be with Me when you finish this race, Orphans you're not you have been taught, I will help you find Me if I'm sought. Amen

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/28/2010 3:45:00 AM
Oops! I almost forgot to congratulate you, Robert, on having your wise poem featured this week. (I must have been distracted by the first ever End Line Word member contest (my first sponsored contest…See my blogs for information.) So many young men are caught up in a world of competition and hate. Words like these need to be spread. (My son just joined the US Air Force. I worry.) Anyway, I wanted to congratulate you before this week features are posted. So, Congratulations!!! Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 2/23/2010 12:28:00 PM
Congrats Robert on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a wonderful choice.. luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 2/22/2010 10:18:00 AM
Robert, many congratulations to you for you poetry being featured on the Soups home page >> James
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Date: 2/22/2010 6:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured on PoetrySoup this week Robert. May you have many more featured. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/22/2010 5:49:00 AM
Congrats on this feature, old friend. BIG LOVE, daver
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Date: 1/25/2010 5:16:00 PM
Dear Robert, W O W !! Are YOU a "MAN of the Cloth" YOU very well could be YOUR words go directly to the Heart of Mankind I Bow before YOUR Talented PEN Superb Write ALWAYS YOURS...HG
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Date: 1/11/2010 4:16:00 PM
We need Snoop Dawg to do this one.
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Date: 1/11/2010 4:16:00 PM
We need Snoop Dawg to do this one.
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Date: 12/20/2009 5:43:00 AM
Robert, your faith oozes n your words here, nice piece >> James
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Date: 12/14/2009 4:50:00 PM
Robert, I cannot understand anyone that has ever read the Bible not finding truth. It is what I try to start my day on. Man does not live by bread alone but by every word of God. Thanks for your appreciated comments. God Bless with your writing endeavors. Ron
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Date: 12/3/2009 8:51:00 AM
Your words capture what a man must do, so full of reality.I enjoyed very much. Thank you
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Date: 12/1/2009 10:32:00 PM
wow this one is really long but good.
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Date: 11/28/2009 6:48:00 AM
I so much enjoyed this writting. In the world inwhich we are now living it seems that America and the world has forgot the true meaning of life. Your words spoke to me, and it is so wonderful to know there are people standing for God and His love, and to speak out against hate, and wrong. I truly pray that God will continue to bless you and your writings. Thanks so much for posting this, and sharing. Wendell. Loved the message.
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Date: 11/10/2009 7:42:00 PM
Dear Robert, You are going to be very Popular here when YOU can write sucha gripping POEM As this If YOU don't mind A word of Advice YOU should refrain from using "I Don't Know as the Form This POEM can be an Iteral POEM or a Free Verse In the Contests the Form is very important both in Member and POETRYSOUP Contests YOU may be Overlooked for a Placement in said contests If YOU look at the forms of POETRY and see which one is closest to what YOU have written Free Verse is always best...HG
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Date: 10/28/2009 4:11:00 AM
Welcome to soup. The rap poem is great testament to your faith. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 10/21/2009 7:06:00 AM
Thank you for sharing a bit of your heart in this write Robert. Enjoyed reading. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/20/2009 4:12:00 PM
Nice testament of your faith. Keep writing. Sara
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