Kayod5 Kayode Poet Quatern

Ruth

Ruth.



Though your morsel now a tear
And your apparel now a wear,
Behold I shall not let go;
I shall not forsake you my goal.

I shall not desert  my dear,
Though your morsel now a tear,
The oak was great,you’re my glory;
The oak now ash, you’re my story.

Sad the storm drenches you in cold,
I must hence with all me you hold;
Though  your morsel now a tear,
The stress and labour for my rear.

No I shall not ,I shall not let go,
I shall hold you tight my goal;
I shall hold you with fanfare,
Though your morsel now a tear.



Contest  : Ruth.
Sponsor : Isaiah Zerbst.

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Poet Destroyer A March 23, 2014 at 1:02 AM A lovely win, Kayod5.... xox~ Linda

Skat A March 22, 2014 at 3:59 PM Koyod5, This is a nice entry in "Isaiah Z's RUTH contest." congratulations on your win. LOVE ~SKAT~

Sara Kendrick March 21, 2014 at 6:01 PM Way to go with this great work..Enjoyed reading your winning work..Sara

Isaiah Zerbst March 21, 2014 at 1:32 PM The only quatern in the contest; seems like quintain was vastly preferred. You have great sadness in this poem as well as considering what Ruth had to endure physically, and it ends on a feeling of togetherness and devotion: all very positive things. I could wish, however, that there was more focus on the actual person and words of Ruth, as most of the poem could be applied to any number of people.

Joyce Johnson March 21, 2014 at 10:49 AM Great Quatern. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Len Gasun March 21, 2014 at 6:18 AM My hearty congratulations on you great write and win my dear friend K5. TYSM for sharing as well. love lots and big hugs, Leonora Kayod5 Kayode March 21, 2014 at 6:56 AM Thanks you very much for your love,may the Lord reward you in fold. Bye Leonora.

Dr.Ram Mehta March 21, 2014 at 5:20 AM Nice presentation on the honesty and devotion on Ruth.. Congrats on a fine win, kayod5 Kayod5 Kayode March 21, 2014 at 6:57 AM Thanks you very much for your love,may the Lord reward you in fold. Bye Dr. Ram.

Verlena S. Walker March 21, 2014 at 2:04 AM We'll done... Congratulations on your win... Verlena Kayod5 Kayode March 21, 2014 at 6:58 AM Thanks you very much for your love,may the Lord reward you in fold. Bye Verlena.

Sara Kendrick March 9, 2014 at 6:04 AM Very interesting work about Ruth..Way to go..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Sandip Goswami March 7, 2014 at 2:22 PM Nice... " The oak was great,you’re my glory; The oak now ash, you’re my story. " it's super dear...Best wishes from India . Sandip ( I am not SANDY ) Kayod5 Kayode March 7, 2014 at 2:40 PM Deeply sorry for the mistake in spelling your name , I have effected the correction.Thank you for the visit and the comment.God bless India.

Nette Onclaud March 5, 2014 at 3:50 PM lifting me tenderly, kayods.. what an awesome pen you've got... just beautifully flowing!.. huggs

Donna Jones March 5, 2014 at 12:07 PM You captured the story of Ruth wonderfully..we'll done

Russell Sivey March 4, 2014 at 9:20 PM Yes! An excellently enchanting Quatern you have written here my friend! I truly loved reading this elaborately spun poem this evening! What a glorious piece, Great Work!!