Running With the Wild

Running With the Wild
     By Dane Smith-Johnsen

It was back in the year 1963,
Among horses wild and free; --
Many manes and tails untamed by the breeze
Were seen dashing past dunes without trees.
And the horses remained under cobalt skies 
Lacking fear of nature or man.
They were wanting and I was wanting.
To run freely on the land,
And we felt with a soul that was deeply honed.
I and those horses so free—
Understanding all between God and delight.
Dreaming and running, we.

Some cowboys, out there distantly riding,
Heedless of horses and me; --
Hot!  Summer's season  (as all men know,
In the desert sands out west.)
The heat that blazed down from the sun, burning
Soon sent sunburned riders away.

But our wanting was stronger by far than the heat.
That drove countless others away--
Seemingly much wiser than we-
But scorching rays from the heavens above,
Nor the desert lands without trees.
Could dissuade the wanting in me
Oh, dream of my ride filled with love.

Bareback, clutching his mane, wind-songs running wildly sing
Of all dreams that were ever in me--
Not one was as lovely as this-
Reckoning the forces of reasons discourse.
Nor realities wisdom could see,
For never had ever my soul felt the force.
Of this wonderful unity, we: --

Now, the memories bring to heart wonderful dreams.
Of oneness between horses and me;
And the thought never leaves but my dream is retrieved.
Of the love given ride through the sands;
And so, all of my soul, reaches out in the night
For the wanting and giving on the wind's bareback flight.
In the desert when no one could see—
The appaloosa bonded with me.


Tell me a story contest entry 
Sponsored by: Elaine George

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 12/29/2012 1:49:00 PM
Dane... a wonderful story you tell...pd
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Date: 12/18/2009 7:57:00 AM
Hi Dane-Ann, Congrats on your second place win in Elaine's contest "Tell Me A Story", very well deserved!! Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/17/2009 11:57:00 PM
Congrats on your success in Elaine's contest Dane.Rgds Brian
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Date: 12/17/2009 6:11:00 PM
Congratulations Dane Ann, on this wonderful 2nd place winning poem! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 12/17/2009 1:54:00 PM
Congraatulations on your 2nd place win! Well done. Krista
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Date: 12/17/2009 1:05:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS, dear friend, on your second-place win in Elaine's contest!! Awesome work. Love, carolyn
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Date: 12/17/2009 1:03:00 PM
Good use of imagery. A lot of depth in this poem. Congratulations on your second place finish in Elaine's contest. Way to go! Enjoy your honor. Keep up the good writing. Karen
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Date: 12/17/2009 11:04:00 AM
Dear Dane Ann, Congratulations on your 2nd place win in my contest. This poem is truly a MASTERPIECE! Thank you for sharing your unique talent. If you will soup-mail me your mailing address, I will forward your certificate. Love, Lainie
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Date: 10/26/2009 3:23:00 PM
Hello Dane, Very nice poem i like it. Thank you for your lovely comments on my poems. I dont know how to enter competitions and my x factor poem is about our equivelet of American Idol by Simon Cowell and the alure of fame . Please read my poem Picture i think you will like it i hope. Thank you love , Keep writing
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Date: 10/25/2009 10:09:00 AM
What a wonderful narrative, Dane! I can clearly see every image you describe and horses are amazing creatures that deserve to run free. How I would love to bond with an appaloosa this way! I have ridden often and bonded with many horses; they seem to have a sense about the spirit of those who ride them. Excellent work, my friend! Love, carolyn
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Date: 10/25/2009 3:14:00 AM
Excellent what you wrote here, Dane Ann! Do you also speak German? I posted the original (German) version of The distance is fragile together with the English Version especially for you to read. Gert
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Date: 10/24/2009 6:26:00 PM
Its beautiful and of course, I love horses... well done... Best of luck in the contest.... I invite you to read my poem ...Wild Horses
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Date: 10/24/2009 5:17:00 PM
Dane Ann, i could picture you out there on your Appaloosa, riding the wild wind - another excellent piece. Best of luck in Elaine's contest >> James
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Date: 10/24/2009 9:59:00 AM
Dear Dane Ann, Thank you for participating in my contest and thank you for all your kind comments. lainie
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Date: 10/23/2009 4:46:00 PM
What a wonderful story..anything about horses gets right to my heart. Well done..youll do well in the contest Im sure. BG
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