Rose Buds To Remember

Yellow rose buds she requested for her senior prom
Talked about how they would match a satin dress
Did not know where the roses would come from
And, as a young girl of ten, it was anyone’s guess.

Red rose buds she requested be in her bridal bouquet
To be carried next to her heart brimming with love
In her wedding pictures always a reminder of the day
She took her vows before her father up above.

Pink rose buds she requested be in the maternity ward
Where she delivered the first of her four daughters
Pink roses would surely strike the perfect chord
For a waiting room full of anxiously awaiting fathers.

White rose buds she requested be placed on her casket
A bouquet with Baby’s Breath and Asparagus Fern
Then carried to a nursing home in a wicker basket
Expressing to final friendships her lasting concern.

Yellow, red, pink, white rose buds—her life story told
In the most important times of her incredible life
Their soft fragrances to her were like finest gold
I know because, yes, she was my exceptional wife.

FIFTH PLACE WINNER
Submitted to "Rose Poetry Contest"
Sponsored by Robert James Liguori
November 15, 2021

THIRD PLACE WINNER
Written May 29, 2021
For the "Workshop - Inviting the Muse" Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Jack Webster
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Rodrigues Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 6:40 PM
Beautiful! Love how she was thoughtful enough to express her love to those in the nursing home. I volunteered in one before the pandemic and think fondly of those lives where we bonded. Congratulations!
Jones Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 4:45 PM
Thoughtfully penned with all the reasons for roses. Enjoyed the stories and congrats on your win.
Kauffman Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 1:20 PM
Milt, this is beyond special - the breath of creativity whispered in every line and every example of each rose and its place in your wife's life. This is a fav for me. Thank you for this beautiful tribute to your wife and her extraordinary life. Blessings!
Goldsmith Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 9:09 AM
Back with Congratulations on this new win. Love this wonderful story/write. Have blessed day..........
Kendrick Avatar
June 21, 2021 at 8:04 AM
Whoa!! I really liked this emotive one. My mother always loved roses and at one home she had some. She took really good care of them and they bloomed profusely. Congrats on your winner. Way to go. Sara
Hankins Avatar
June 21, 2021 at 8:13 AM
Thank you so much, Sara, for your warm and thoughtful comment on my poem.
Goldsmith Avatar
June 11, 2021 at 8:27 AM
Congratulations on your win. What an amazing tribute story/write. This needs to be framed with the different roses. Enjoy your win with blessings.........
Hankins Avatar
June 11, 2021 at 9:55 AM
Thank you so much, Paula, for your sweet note.
Alex Avatar
June 11, 2021 at 5:46 AM
'her life story told In the most important times of her incredible life' Beautifully written. Congratulations!
Hankins Avatar
June 11, 2021 at 7:58 AM
Thanks so much, Chris. I really appreciated your kind comment.
Krutsinger Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 3:22 AM
A gorgeous tribute to a life, in the way of roses; so wonderfully penned!
Hankins Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 8:32 AM
Thank you so much, Caren. It was a long-pondered write.
Delaney Avatar
May 30, 2021 at 11:45 AM
Such a wonderful tribute to your dear wife. Wonderful memories to recall. Good Luck in the contest.
Delaney Avatar
June 3, 2021 at 5:40 PM
Hi Milton…you asked where I have been…I have been doing an online art course learning about water reactive inks…..Love playing with all the different effects you can achieve. See my samples here. http://suzpaperdaze.blogspot.com/
Hankins Avatar
May 30, 2021 at 12:43 PM
Thanks so much, Suz. I really appreciated your read and your comment. Where have you been? I have missed you.
Buhagiar Avatar
May 30, 2021 at 10:09 AM
This my friend is an astounding poem. The color of roses have their meaning and you described them perfectly. A life story full of imagery and meaning.
Hankins Avatar
May 30, 2021 at 10:57 AM
Thank you so much, Victor, for your encouraging words. I really appreciated them.
Faulkner Avatar
May 29, 2021 at 9:24 PM
She does sound exceptional, you told a part of her story in colors so meaningful, it sounds like you still miss her and love her.
Hankins Avatar
May 29, 2021 at 9:36 PM
Very much, Michelle. Thanks for your thoughtfulness.
Ball Avatar
May 29, 2021 at 9:11 PM
This is so beautiful Milton. A lovely tribute to someone you loved vey much. Very touching. God Bless, JB
Hankins Avatar
May 29, 2021 at 9:37 PM
Thank you, Judy. Yes, I loved her very, very much, and I miss her every day.
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