Rose

I started out as a pretty rose bud, the rains are coming maybe even a flood. Then the bright sun will come out, my pedals open up without a doubt. I am showing off my new dress in pink, the bees and butterflies want a drink. This spring garden is coming alive, even the chipmunks did arrive. In the pretty garden I watch and see, because I cannot flee.

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Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 3/19/2024 3:29:00 AM

In that pretty garden your rose looks lovely and so do you dear poet, Congrats on your poem, a job well done, love xo

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/19/2024 9:47:00 AM

Thanks for your note, kind words and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my garden "Rose" write. It was fun to bring to life... Have a blessed day writing away..........................

Valsa George

Date: 3/18/2024 11:46:00 PM

I see the pretty rosebud opening and bees and butterflies swarming around. A beautiful poem dear Paula. Congratulations on your win.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/19/2024 9:44:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my "Rose" write. It was fun to write. Have a blessed day writing away..........................

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 3/18/2024 9:26:00 PM

A beautiful poem, Paula. I loved visitng with your rose, and discovering something of her life. Congratulations on your win.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/19/2024 9:43:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you loved visiting with my "Rose." I enjoyed writing about my sweet "Rose" in her garden. Have a blessed day writing away..........................

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/18/2024 8:00:00 AM

"4 Place" Rose ~ Date Written: 3/5/2024 ~~~ A Personification Rhyme, About A Pink Rose....

Tania Kitchin

Date: 3/17/2024 2:38:00 PM

Paula, congratulations on your winning placement with your sweet poem!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/18/2024 7:59:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you found my "Rose" write to be sweet. I enjoyed writing this fun/sweet "Rose" write for your wonderful contest. Thanks for having this contest/for my placement. Have a blessed day writing away..........................

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 3/15/2024 5:56:00 AM

Hi Paula, I like the way you made this garden so lively and light thru the rose's perspective. Enjoyed ..

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/16/2024 12:17:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like my spring "Rose" write. Yes, it is a lively garden with pretty flowers... Have a blessed day writing away.....................

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/9/2024 7:16:00 PM

I love that 'dress in pink.' A shame that the rose is imprisoned in the garden, isn't it? Give her a 'Get out of Jail Free' card. ~ Man O. Polly

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/10/2024 8:24:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my "Rose" write/love my dress of pink. I love my pink dress but I am imprisoned here in the garden. Maybe one day I will 'Get out of Jail Free' card. Hahaha!!! Have a blessed day writing away.........................

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/6/2024 9:04:00 PM

Very charming!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/10/2024 8:17:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you found my "Rose" write to be very charming. It was fun to write.... Have a blessed day writing away..........................

Sam Kauffman

Date: 3/5/2024 10:42:00 AM

Very pretty, Paula, especially from one who has an intimate knowledge of flowers. Best wishes for the contest! Blessings to you garden rose!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/6/2024 7:40:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your best wishes. Glad you found my "Rose" write to be very pretty. No garden here just a couple of bushes. They do flower/gives me something to play with. Hahaha!!! I love pink roses only store bought/not alive here. They are very pretty with no care. Have a blessed day writing away..........................

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/5/2024 10:42:00 AM

- An early beautiful spring rose in her new dress, Paula :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs ?

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/6/2024 7:34:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your best wishes. Glad you like my spring "Rose" write. That put a smile on my heart. Thanks... Hugs...Have a blessed day writing away.....................

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/5/2024 7:55:00 AM

Rose~Date Written: 3/5/2024~~~ A Personification Rhyme, About A Pink Rose....