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Rose Vermilion petals encompassed by chartreuse blades saturated in dew drops from heaven’s longing abyss nourishing each honey bee through flourishing efflorescence embracing each moment in a scarlet splendorous blossom elegant by nature shining as the eventide descends delicate and tender she is graciously kind holding a special place in my grieving heart she brings me memories of death and love I gently rest three at my sister's grave World Vision Poetry Contest Vermillion Scythe April 10, 2018

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Date: 6/2/2018 7:06:00 PM
Wow, Laura. Every line is packed with punch. An awesome write and most deserving podium finish.
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Date: 5/17/2018 6:24:00 AM
Beautiful but sad poem Laura, congrats on your victory.
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Date: 5/16/2018 8:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful and touching word vision poem. Well done!
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Date: 5/16/2018 8:38:00 PM
Very touching--CONGRATS, Luloo! Janice
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Date: 4/10/2018 12:29:00 PM
Beautiful, restful reading and memories of my loved ones, too.
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Date: 4/10/2018 8:32:00 AM
Very touching, Laura. Lovely.
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