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Romantic Moonlight

silvery grey moon
kisses the shimmering lake
romance fills the air

Moon Spoon Contest
Sponsored by Kai Michael Neumann

12~18~16

Copyright © Jan Allison | Year Posted 2016

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January 6, 2017 at 9:30 AM

This is actually very, very good! If I was judging the contest this would take some beating...Impressed, Jan. All the very best for your New Year - Cheers! :) john

January 6, 2017 at 1:58 PM

I wish you'd been judging I got an N/A lol yet another for my ever growing collection:-) hugs jan xx

January 5, 2017 at 11:32 AM

Great imagery and romantic thought.A7

January 6, 2017 at 1:57 PM

Thanks Robert:-) hugs jan xx

David William Breidenthal

December 25, 2016 at 6:09 AM

:) Marvelous and insightful poem with passion throughout

December 25, 2016 at 6:11 AM

Thanks so much David:-) Hope you have a wonderful time over the festive period:-) hugs Jan xx

Newton Ranaweera

December 23, 2016 at 5:22 AM

Romance fills my heart too. Beautiful.

December 23, 2016 at 1:47 PM

Thanks so much Newton:-) hugs Jan xx

December 22, 2016 at 5:08 AM

Aww! This is so sweet, Jan:) love the picture you have chosen too:)

December 22, 2016 at 2:28 PM

Thanks so much Jo:-) hugs Jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis

December 21, 2016 at 7:26 AM

How beautifully romantic! A seven dear, Jan!

December 21, 2016 at 7:00 PM

Thanks Demetrios so lovely to see you my friend:-) hugs Jan xx

Poet Destroyer A

December 20, 2016 at 12:42 PM

Oooooo JAN, who I miss a whole poetic bunch. This is a nice delight to read. I like your approach of a simple topic for a haiku (your haiku) Rich with Imagery. A perfect 7. I can sleep to the imagery and hope I don't drown in the reflection. Love LINDA

December 20, 2016 at 4:40 PM

aww thanks Linda I am amazed at how far I have come in less than 3 years:-) hugs jan xx

December 20, 2016 at 7:49 AM

Love it!

December 20, 2016 at 10:38 AM

Think I'll send it off to haiku journal see what they think:-) hugs janxx

December 19, 2016 at 1:04 PM

Moon kisses . . . love that image!

December 19, 2016 at 6:56 PM

aww thanks David - I still drop by to read your poem that I LOVE so much whenever I see your avatar I am reminded of what a fabulous poem it is:-) hugs Jan xx

December 19, 2016 at 11:15 AM

Hi Jan, This is sooo romantic. Nice imagery as well. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

December 19, 2016 at 6:57 PM

Thanks Alexis I don't do much slushy stuff lol:-) hugs Jan xx

December 19, 2016 at 10:26 AM

Moon spoons the lake :) Wonderful.

December 19, 2016 at 6:57 PM

aww thanks:-) hugs jan xx

December 19, 2016 at 10:00 AM

Very sweet Jan

December 19, 2016 at 6:57 PM

Thanks Tim:-) hugs jan xx

December 19, 2016 at 9:18 AM

Beautiful Jan, you have capture the enchantment of the moon and romance wonderfully

December 19, 2016 at 6:58 PM

Your romantic poems must be rubbing off on me Chris!!!:-) hugs Jan xx

December 19, 2016 at 7:51 AM

This is one of the best Haiku that I've read brilliant Jan, good luck in the contest.

December 19, 2016 at 6:59 PM

aww thanks for the lovely comment Roy:-) I never know if I have written a proper haiku:-) hugs Jan xx

December 19, 2016 at 4:37 AM

Beautiful imagery...A big 7... Good luck with the contest...

December 19, 2016 at 6:59 PM

Thanks Supraja:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

December 19, 2016 at 4:08 AM

- Lovely and romantic ... in the moonlight - Good luck in the contest, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

December 19, 2016 at 6:59 PM

Thanks so much Anne Lise:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

December 19, 2016 at 3:34 AM

La Luna, l'amore! A beautiful romantic piece from you Jan! I loved it! : ) 7

December 19, 2016 at 7:00 PM

Thanks so much for your lovely comment Connie:-) hugs Jan xx

December 18, 2016 at 10:16 PM

Ohhhhh, now I just need to be kissed! Ew la la, Jan ... CayCay

December 19, 2016 at 7:01 PM

aww Thanks so much CayCay:-) hugs Jan xx

Eileen Manassian

December 18, 2016 at 8:54 PM

Love to read a romantic piece from you. Kisses....yes....nature also breathes of romance. Hugs, my dear Queen of Humor!!! :)

December 19, 2016 at 7:02 PM

They are few and far between Eileen - you are the Queen of passion:-) hugs jan xx

December 18, 2016 at 8:13 PM

As a confirmed lunatic... I love all moon poems! And this was no exception! A great haiku, Jan!

December 19, 2016 at 7:03 PM

ha ha ha I like your type of lunartic's Rick lol:-) hugs Jan xx

December 18, 2016 at 8:06 PM

If ever a poem and a photo belonged together, this is it! A Marriage made in heaven, or at least the moon!

December 19, 2016 at 7:03 PM

aww thanks what a lovely comment Arthur:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

December 18, 2016 at 7:16 PM

lovely, Jan, and the picture too.

December 18, 2016 at 7:24 PM

Thanks Andrea:-) hugs jan xx

December 18, 2016 at 4:13 PM

A huge moon with a heart! Nice, Jan! Good luck in contest! Hugs, Kim

December 18, 2016 at 4:19 PM

Thanks Kim its a lovely subject to write about for the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

December 18, 2016 at 3:56 PM

This is so good, Jan, good luck in the contest. Congratulate your son for me... Hugs and Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays

December 18, 2016 at 3:58 PM

Thanks Eve I am still on cloud 9:-) He is encouraging me to get my funny poems published and I will achieve this next year to make HIM proud of me and to say ' I did it':-) YOU inspire me my friend!!!:-) hugs jan xx

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