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In your absence the ink thirsts in barren land, in your presence it sings like nightingales. Like waterfalls it flows in your majesty, drifting to a bridge connecting our hearts. Silent One 13 February 2018 Example for Romantic charm in 4 lines

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Bl Devnath

Date: 3/3/2018 11:05:00 PM

Beautiful romantic poem, done well. Good luck if for contest. Loved always, bl

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 2/27/2018 2:16:00 PM

So well written these romantic pieces. Love the four pieces. love phyl

Joe Dimino

Date: 2/27/2018 5:08:00 AM

Beautifully said, Si; I could not imagine being in love and not wanting to write about it; in fact, sing to the world. Love the imagery and great flow.

Silent One
Date: 2/27/2018 6:33:00 AM

Thank you.

Susan Ashley

Date: 2/24/2018 11:16:00 AM

Oh just breathtaking Silent One.. Deeply poetic and romantic expressed in lush and exquisite imagery..

Silent One
Date: 2/27/2018 6:33:00 AM

Thank you.

Paul Callus

Date: 2/14/2018 12:52:00 PM

That is truly romantic, S-1, especially the opening and closing lines! Regards // paul

Silent One
Date: 2/14/2018 4:29:00 PM

Thank you..

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 2/14/2018 7:06:00 AM

Touchingly romantic dear, S,O. Enjoy the day!

Silent One
Date: 2/14/2018 4:29:00 PM

Thank you..

Jeannie Cronin

Date: 2/14/2018 2:21:00 AM

Hello again, you mentioned romance, most might assume romance with a person because of your contest, but I get more of a feeling the romance is with your muse. I guess it's perfect if your muse is a person. If I had to pick a line I really relate to, it would probably be the third. There is a true happiness I feel when the words just come flowing out like a waterfall.

Silent One
Date: 2/14/2018 4:30:00 PM

The poem is about not writing when the beloved is not there.. Thank you for your visit Jeannie..

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/13/2018 9:01:00 PM

WoW! Silent, This is a good example for your contest. These four lines are very romantic:-) Alexis

Silent One
Date: 2/14/2018 4:30:00 PM

Thank you.

Carole Duet

Date: 2/13/2018 8:36:00 PM

"...the ink thirsts"! Wow! How totally poetic can you get? lol Just wonderful, ZZ. All of them are wonderful. I couldn't make up my mind which one is my favorite so I "favorited them all! :)

Silent One
Date: 2/14/2018 4:32:00 PM

Thank you for your kind words Carole...

Maria Williams

Date: 2/13/2018 7:57:00 PM

You know what? All four are my favourites. Heaven Sent....Maria

Silent One
Date: 2/14/2018 4:32:00 PM

Thank you Maria..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/13/2018 5:47:00 PM

You know what? I think this one is my favorite of the four!!

Silent One
Date: 2/13/2018 5:49:00 PM

I am glad you liked it.. Thank you Andrea..

Akkina Downing

Date: 2/13/2018 5:05:00 PM

Simply beautiful! Can't wait for tomorrow poem :)

Silent One
Date: 2/13/2018 5:06:00 PM

Thank you Kina, will see if I will write a new one or maybe be lazy and post an old one...

Jean Murray

Date: 2/13/2018 4:44:00 PM

So, you need to be with her to be inspired? That is romantic.

Silent One
Date: 2/13/2018 4:46:00 PM

The pen always flows in the presence of the beloved.. Thank you Jean..

Chris Hagy

Date: 2/13/2018 4:09:00 PM

Another lovely write Silent...I like the first line best :)

Silent One
Date: 2/13/2018 4:46:00 PM

Thank you Chris..

Constance La France

Date: 2/13/2018 3:18:00 PM

Silent, lovely and a great example for your contest

Silent One
Date: 2/13/2018 4:47:00 PM

Thank you..

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/13/2018 1:48:00 PM

- Beautiful charm, S.O. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One
Date: 2/13/2018 2:42:00 PM

Thank you..

Emile Pinet

Date: 2/13/2018 1:27:00 PM

An outpouring of emotions that surges up from the heart, as your words transport us with their beauty to the magic realm of two hearts in love, Emile.

Silent One
Date: 2/13/2018 2:42:00 PM

Thank you Emile..

Mike Gentile

Date: 2/13/2018 12:45:00 PM

what a great example of what can be said in four lines, looks easy but it's not, Very romantic SO!!

Silent One
Date: 2/13/2018 2:43:00 PM

Thank you Mike, I thought this one was probably the weakest of the four examples.. but it seems to have the most comments..

Alfred Berggren

Date: 2/13/2018 11:14:00 AM

A great poem only matched by a great accompanying picture.

Silent One
Date: 2/13/2018 11:25:00 AM

Thank you Alfred...

Emma Green

Date: 2/13/2018 8:36:00 AM

Such a clever use of words, metaphorical ink yet again - especially in that first line. Romantic charm indeed. The visual compliments without distracting - too much!

Silent One
Date: 2/13/2018 11:25:00 AM

Thank you for your kind feedback Emma..