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Rolling Melody

Dear God There’s a song in my heart I know you can hear A rolling melody Much like the waves of the sea It’s a prayer Without a beginning With no end It’s a prayer It’s a feeling Thanking you for The love I’ve been granted And pleading For your watchful eye AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on February 14, 2018 for MID FEB 2018 STANDARD CONTEST sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 3RD

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Janis Thompson

Date: 2/18/2018 11:57:00 AM

Congratulations. Love it Line. We all should feel this way, everyday.

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/18/2018 12:48:00 PM

Yes, Janis. I couldn't agree with you more.

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 2/18/2018 9:27:00 AM

Lovely and faithful write, Line, with such heartfelt and sincere praise ... I said this a few times out loud this glorious Sunday morn! Blessings and congrats, my Dear Friend! :-) <3

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/18/2018 9:37:00 AM

Thank you, Gregory. Much appreciated.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 2/15/2018 1:50:00 PM

Another winner in my books! Line you have the gift for sure! What a lovely prayer! Blessings, my friend! Pandita

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/15/2018 2:36:00 PM

Thank you so much, Pandita. Most appreciated.

Lewis Raynes

Date: 2/14/2018 9:09:00 PM

love the honesty in this short write Line, beautiful

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/14/2018 10:07:00 PM

Thank you, Lewis. Much appreciated.

Charlie Smith

Date: 2/14/2018 3:42:00 PM

Lovely prayer Line, well done

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/14/2018 4:33:00 PM

Thank you so much, Charlie, Much appreciated.

John Hamilton

Date: 2/14/2018 3:21:00 PM

Very spiritual write Line, I appreciate it when others write like this. Although usually we get few replies/comments it's still rewarding.

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/14/2018 4:32:00 PM

I write many genres for myself, some will and some won't resonate with everyone. It's the nature of the beast. Thank you so much for your visit and comment, John.