Road Trip

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INTO THE HEXALINE GROOVE

SPONSOR: Nette Onclaud

5/5/2025

*a butterfly was next to our vehicle. I felt my deceased mother sent her comfort.

Movie depictions, of a ladies’ road trip, bring adventure and camaraderie; compare to real life; silence deafening. —by poet Road Trip pivotal butterfly in my throat as they sleep driven to silent space my chest aches without words the rest stop brings relief lambent wings of mother

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Howard Kerr

Date: 5/10/2025 12:58:00 AM

Congratulations Kim, on your selection on sheer talent and innovative writing. Concise yet very visual imagery Howard

Paige Hind

Date: 5/5/2025 11:31:00 AM

This is one beautiful short poem, dear Kim. Multiple meanings, it's so beautiful - hugs xx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/7/2025 12:11:00 PM

Thank you so much! Hugs

Joe Dimino

Date: 5/5/2025 8:50:00 AM

I hear you. Duty out trumps passion -- thank God for dreams! A warmth of escape.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/5/2025 8:51:00 AM

Thank you, Joe! :)

Silent One

Date: 5/5/2025 6:40:00 AM

You cant beat a good road trip.. I remember when I went on one last year on my own... It was great and I saw some great sights.... and wrote some great poetry...

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/5/2025 8:19:00 AM

This one wasn’t as great. Still the destination was nice! Traveling always brings about great poetry! Hugs and great to hear from you. I actually went to your page yesterday and saw you haven’t posted for a while.