Rivers

Rivers... Are like veins... Spreading like vines A drought sips the water ~ Sunshine Written for Dear Hearts Writing Challenge 1, May 2019 Poetry Contest 5-10-2019

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Sandra Haight

Date: 5/18/2019 5:43:00 PM

Wonderful imagery in your Cinqku, Charles. Congratulations on your Podium win. Sandra :)

Constance La France

Date: 5/14/2019 9:51:00 AM

Charlie, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this excellent poem!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/14/2019 3:44:00 AM

- A beautiful poem, Charlie ... congratulations on a great win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/13/2019 6:25:00 PM

what a great line about the drought "sips the water"!! Congrats for your win, charles.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/12/2019 12:30:00 PM

An amazing comparision Charles -veins and rivers. A great write. Hugs, Jennifer

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/10/2019 3:02:00 PM

Gteat discriptive verse Charlie, Good luck. Tom

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/10/2019 12:08:00 PM

charles, i like how you treated the theme with a fine volta!...huggs

Arturo Michael

Date: 5/10/2019 10:09:00 AM

Hope Sunshine doesn't drink too much...Nice write...