River Walk

River Walk
streaming from heaven moonbeams stroll on the river … gazing up at stars
08-27-2014 Contest: One Solo EPIC Senryu or Haiku - River Walk Sponsor: Poet Destroyer A Placement: 3rd
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Date: 5/9/2017 4:05:00 PM
Gorgeous imagery, Pandita. I can picture the scene now! All the best, John.
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/10/2017 8:20:00 AM
Good Morning John, I'm so happy you enjoyed this haiku. It's one of my favorite pieces! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 12/3/2015 1:11:00 AM
Pandita, lovely haiku, Enjoyed. SKAT
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Date: 12/4/2015 8:18:00 AM
Hi Skat, thank you so very much for stopping by and complimenting this piece. I really appreciate your visit! Pandita
Date: 3/21/2015 5:15:00 PM
thank you for the nice reply once again...PD
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Date: 9/29/2014 11:25:00 AM
Nicely done (7)
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Date: 9/29/2014 2:20:00 PM
You just made my day! I thank you kindly, my friend, for your wonderful compliments! Have a lovely week! Pandita
Date: 9/20/2014 10:17:00 AM
A perfect river walk. Who else can except moonbeam? Love.
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Date: 9/20/2014 11:02:00 AM
Thank you so very much, dear Rajit for your wonderful compliments! I appreciate your kind comments. Pandita
Date: 9/9/2014 2:20:00 PM
This is a lovely haiku, Pandita! moonlight never fails to capture our heart or imagination. Congrats on your deserved podium finish! // paul
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Date: 9/9/2014 5:55:00 PM
Dear Paul, thank you so very much for visiting and for complimenting this piece! It means a lot to me, my friend! Pandita
Date: 9/8/2014 9:15:00 AM
Many warm congratulations on your win and on this great and splendid haiku my dear friend, Pandita! Big sweet hugs and cheers! love lots, Leonora
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Date: 9/8/2014 11:54:00 AM
Hi Leonora, I so very much appreciate your wonderful compliments as always! Great to hear from you! Warmest regards to you, my friend! Pandita
Date: 9/7/2014 7:23:00 PM
Love the image...congrats
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Date: 9/7/2014 8:55:00 PM
David, many thanks for stopping by and complimenting my work. Pandita
Date: 9/7/2014 5:13:00 AM
- Well done Pandita .... 3rd place !!! - Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest: "River Walk" - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/7/2014 3:46:00 PM
Thanks so much my friend for your great support and compliments! Pandita
Date: 9/6/2014 10:44:00 PM
Great seeing this one again Congrats, Pandita.
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Date: 9/7/2014 1:44:00 AM
Andrea thank you for stopping by and for your compliments. Pandita
Date: 9/6/2014 9:20:00 AM
Oh, I like this one, Pandita. Lovely!
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Date: 9/6/2014 9:35:00 AM
I thank you kindly, Faye, for your wonderful compliments! Have a lovely weekend! Pandita
Date: 9/6/2014 9:12:00 AM
Light on the water is a lovely thing.,.congrats on your lovely win..BG
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Date: 9/6/2014 9:34:00 AM
Barbara, I thank you for your sweet compliments! All the best, Pandita.
Date: 9/6/2014 9:11:00 AM
I find your Haiku very beautiful Pandita . Congratulations.
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Date: 9/6/2014 9:33:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Brenda for your kind compliments! Warmest regards. Pandita
Date: 9/6/2014 6:54:00 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations Panditia it was a joy to read this again:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 9/6/2014 8:00:00 AM
Jan, thanks so much for your congratulations! Warmest regards. Pandita
Date: 9/6/2014 5:04:00 AM
Nicely done haiku, congrats on the win, Pandita
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Date: 9/6/2014 7:59:00 AM
Many thanks, Dr. Ram. All the best to you! Pandita
Date: 9/5/2014 11:26:00 PM
Pretty-grats on your win :)
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Date: 9/6/2014 7:58:00 AM
Thank you very much, Casarah! Have a great weekend!
Date: 9/5/2014 11:16:00 PM
Pandita, Congratulations, on an awesome River Walk, Win:):):) Enjoy the smiles, and my blog, You're a "River Legend" if you'd like or have time. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 9/6/2014 7:57:00 AM
Hi Linda, thank you so very much for honoring with such a great placement in your contest! Have a wonderful weekend! Pandita
Date: 8/31/2014 2:08:00 PM
Hi Pandita; This is very pretty. When I saw the title, I thought it was the river walk in San Antonio. I have been there and it is beautiful. Thanks for sharing and for the visit... Lucilla
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Date: 8/31/2014 5:58:00 PM
Hi Lucilla, as a matter of fact, I went to college in San Antonio and the River Walk was in the back of my mind. I agree it is a beauty! Thank you so much for the compliments and I hope you are doing well. God bless! Pandita
Date: 8/31/2014 1:43:00 AM
Lovely Pandita is this river walk... Verlena
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Date: 8/31/2014 3:32:00 AM
Thank you so much for your continued inspiration and support, Verlena. Pandita
Date: 8/30/2014 1:15:00 PM
[moonbeams/ light the river walk - the scent of jasmine] Light & Love
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Date: 8/30/2014 2:26:00 PM
Debbie, I love your version - just so lovely! Thanks for stopping by. Have a relaxing weekend! Pandita
Date: 8/29/2014 9:34:00 PM
oooh, that middle line is AWESOME.
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Date: 8/29/2014 9:52:00 PM
Thank you very much, Andrea! Have a great weekend! Pandita
Date: 8/29/2014 8:43:00 PM
A very nice circle of imagery and personification. I suddenly feel like a riverside stroll!
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Date: 8/29/2014 8:46:00 PM
Gary, thank you so very much for visiting and for enjoying this piece! It means a lot to me, my friend! Pandita
Date: 8/29/2014 7:58:00 PM
Great write - so beautiful, Kika
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Date: 8/29/2014 8:45:00 PM
Thank you dear Kika for your thoughtful comments! Pandita
Date: 8/29/2014 11:19:00 AM
A moment to capture, just beautiful. BG
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Date: 8/29/2014 5:56:00 PM
Barbara, I thank you kindly for your wonderful compliments and continued encouragement, my friend. Warmest regards. Pandita
Date: 8/29/2014 8:57:00 AM
Beautiful. I love how to some extent, we all share an intimate relationship with the Moon.
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Date: 8/29/2014 10:31:00 AM
Asad, I thank you kindly for your sweet compliment. I agree with you our beloved Moon just has this mystical quality that is captivating! Pandita
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