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River Song

Somewhere downriver, among thrushes and the swallows,
Ducks in hidden hallows have silky, satin wings 
Among the reedy shallows, swim  ducks in hidden hollows
rest awhile where willows lean, and haloed twilight clings

Summer's been forsaken.  Now the leaves are drifting
A constant current takes them to where the sun resides
Dreams are carried with them, in waters ever shifting
Without much hesitation. a few are cast aside
Sodden leaves are drifting, to where the sun resides

I watch the streams meander, and I hear the seasons call
Water soothes the jagged stones, and sparkles in the sun
The moon arrives and sun goes down, as if from earth it falls
Then it melts into the river's flow, and seams blend into one
I hear the seasons call, as the seams blend into one

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Haight Avatar
January 2, 2017 at 8:05 PM
Beautiful, Carrie. Congratulations on your well-deserved podium win! And, best wishes for a Happy New Year! Hugs, Sandra
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January 1, 2017 at 11:51 AM
Beautiful poetry, Carrie! Congratulations! ...Fran
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January 1, 2017 at 8:01 AM
This is an absolutely gorgeous poem. Congrats on your placement, Carrie!
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July 5, 2015 at 3:11 AM
Congratulations Carrie. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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July 4, 2015 at 11:58 PM
Wonderful imagery n awesome write Carrie! Congrats on big win!
A  Avatar
July 4, 2015 at 7:43 PM
Carrie :) CONGRATULATIONS!!! Thank you for supporting my contest. LOVE SKAT :)
A  Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 10:37 PM
Carrie, Congratulations in Craig's contest. SKAT LOVE
Mohn Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 5:19 PM
What a beauty Carrie...so seamless and expressive…big congrats to you!
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February 18, 2015 at 7:30 AM
Outstanding piece! Congratulations.
Eaton Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 6:16 AM
Congrats Carrie! Beautiful.
A. Sharma Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 4:07 AM
Fabulous write Carrie! Congrats on first place win!
Haight Avatar
February 17, 2015 at 8:15 PM
Carrie, this is so beautiful and flawlessly written in a difficult form. My heartfelt congratulations to your on your 1st Place win! Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
February 17, 2015 at 4:47 PM
Simply outstanding many congrats on your first place Carrie:-) Hugs jan xx
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January 20, 2015 at 2:32 PM
P.S. It is sure to blow every other poem out of the water!
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January 20, 2015 at 2:31 PM
If there is such a thing as a flaw in this poem, I assure you that I would never be able to find it. The very essence of poetry.
Laurie Avatar
January 16, 2015 at 6:08 PM
G'day Carrie... Nice set of lyrics Carrie. Nothing like watching water to soothe the soul. Thank you Carrie - Lindsay
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