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The echo of the river could be heard Flowing across the sand and stone Beckoning to my heart’s hope for love Mystery coloring the moon and stars With sensations of promises emerging His work calloused hands touched my skin With a gentleness that soothed my spirit Caressing my soul with truth and strength Discovered within a man who knows passion Nurtures the dreams as much as the feelings My skin has never felt so loved or adored With a sense of total abandon, he whispers Compassion across my dreams of romance Taking my mind into places it has never been Filling my thoughts with visions of inspiration Delighting my aspirations with discernments Insights into miracles that come from birthing Love and adoration for the union of souls The blending of two hearts, two hopes, two joys Who will know the breath of genuine affection He touches me in a way that feels like a song Dancing across my soul with gentle feelings Gesturing my heart to know the desire born Of secret chances, intensity and urgency that knows God sent us to each other, two who share one fantasy It is this memory that tortures me with it’s intensity Dusty Old Memories Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France July 31, 2020

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Date: 8/9/2020 3:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! What a beautiful romantic poem
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Date: 8/8/2020 3:56:00 AM
Wow! I am in awe of your magic with roamnce and touching words Gina. You always mesmerize and leave me wanting more. This seems like a melody of love that you miss. Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 8/7/2020 12:29:00 PM
Gina, congratulations on your win in my memories contest with this excellent write, the love just drips from each word, a FAV for me _Constance
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Date: 8/7/2020 1:43:00 AM
- A lovely and romantic poem with dusty memories,Gina :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/6/2020 11:05:00 PM
Beautiful and romantic, Gina. Song of Solomon "I'm my beloved's and he is mine". Congratulations on your win! Blessings ~ John
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Date: 7/31/2020 1:36:00 PM
wow, what an ending. It sounds like a love that ended (because now it's an old memory), or perhaps someone who was in your life and then passed away ? In both scenarios so sad. Love this.
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Date: 7/31/2020 12:42:00 PM
You really have a way with love poems Gina. Beautifully worded and filled with emotion this is a winner for sure. God Bless and good luck in the contest. JB
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Date: 7/31/2020 8:58:00 AM
Hi Regina, I really enjoyed your passionate and heartfelt lines. That was some memory! When I read “ He touches in a way that feels like a song, Dancing across my soul with gentle feelings” WoW popped in my head. Great job! Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 7/31/2020 6:31:00 AM
Such passionate memories, Regina:)
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Date: 7/31/2020 3:55:00 AM
Beautiful portrayal!
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