Rite of Passage

Rite Of Passage
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My Walk to Remember

My father takes my hand,
   tucks it in the crook of his arm
      and smiles at me as we walk through 
         the old pasture that has been transformed
            into an outdoor chapel
Tears roll down his face
   with each paced step we take,
      towards the alter, the pastor
         And the hopeful face of my
            of my husband to be
His grip tightens on my hand
   as the congregation stands
      and all eyes turn towards our progression
         as the clouds give way to the
            warming April sun.
I recall the pungent, smoky scent of
   the tanned buckskins we wore,
see the blue cone of the tepee with
   lodge poles reaching towards the pale blue sky
the red and white bunting my sister
   so carefully wrapped around the fence posts
My Beloved’s eyes shining with
   promise, hope and love
and the Indian flute music that
   drifted on the tangy spring air
      marking my rite of passage from
              Daughter to Wife.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Guzzi Avatar
January 12, 2012 at 5:43 PM
magnificent! wish I was there, thanks so much for your kind comments. Light & Love Always
Fraser Avatar
October 29, 2009 at 11:49 AM
Excellent poem Trudy, and lovely to read >> James
Nieves Avatar
October 24, 2009 at 11:35 AM
Touching and warm! I can feel the love in the air. Emotional day for Papa. Beautiful discription of your wedding. ...buckskin...indian flute music...I got the scene. Hey! thanks for passing by and commenting on my poems and the congrats.
Canady Avatar
October 21, 2009 at 9:17 AM
ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL ! ... I Loved This One... Going into my Fav's For Sure ! Good Write Trudy .... MoonBee
Freeman Avatar
October 20, 2009 at 9:32 AM
Nothing more heartwarming than a father that loves his daughter that much, Trudy. A masterful tribute to dad as well as, I am sure a beautiful daughter, that this dad was so proud of. Best of wishes. Sincerely, Love, Moses
Mendoza Avatar
October 19, 2009 at 12:08 PM
Thank you for your warm comments on my poem, and thank you for bringing back fond and warm memories of that day I walked my daughter down the aisle, and of my later singing,"Sunrise, Sunset," "All I Ask of You," and "The Lord's Prayer." And all through the ceremony, despite the lump in my throat, I succeeded in holding back the tears. Wishing you the best in the contest.
Austin Avatar
October 19, 2009 at 8:05 AM
Beautiful piece, Trudy. Love, daver
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
October 18, 2009 at 2:18 PM
Diane, This is beautiful. It leaves me speechless and reverent. Love, Dane Ann
Gass Avatar
October 16, 2009 at 8:30 AM
This is a lovely remeberance, Trudy! You captured this moment, this walk and displayed it so beautifully. Good luck in the contest! Love, Robin
Brown Avatar
October 14, 2009 at 11:09 AM
And the winner is........Trudy, I wish you the best in Constance's contest. This is truly beautiful. Love, Carol
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October 14, 2009 at 8:35 AM
Wow! What a heartfelt poem. The imagery is perfect in capturing the essence of your walk. I hope you have entered this one in Constance's contest. If so, best wishes. No matter what, this is a winner to me. Thank you for sharing it and for your kind comment. Karen
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