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Rising Thoughts - Collab With Jo

High alpine meadows are dusted with wildflowers, And the faraway horizon is outlined with craggy mountain peaks, Half-asleep lights blink through the sun-painted mist, The sunrays dip at varying angles and intensities, creating mixed moods and mysteries ~ It feels good to be up at dawn. Seems a thousand hidden bird voices are singing, A morning symphony created just for this sweet special moment, I walk a narrow path that takes me to woods, The air is softly scented with nature's delicate perfume, And everything is so lush and green ~ As if touched with magical dust. The sky has become a divine clear azure blue, The sun is bathing everything in her golden glow including me, Soon, I am back in the wildflower meadow, With all the wildflower colors swaying sweetly in the wind The mountains high above inspiring ~ I could stay right here forever. ______________________ April 04, 2023 Poetry/Free Verse/Rising Thoughts - Collab With Jo Copyright Protected, ID 04-1537-285-04 All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France and Joanna Daniel Written for the Standard contest, Collab With Jo sponsor, Joanna Daniel, Judged 05/02/2023 Second Place

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Date: 5/2/2023 10:47:00 AM
What a beautiful hike in majestic mountains Constance. I have experienced this wonder many times. You have captured this beauty in your words and your seamless collaboration with Jo. Congratulations and blessings! Here's to many more inspiring mountain trails!
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Constance La France
Date: 5/4/2023 2:48:00 PM
Sam, thank you so much for the wonderful comment, compliment and congratulations !
Date: 5/2/2023 7:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write. Love It. Have a blessed day..................
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Constance La France
Date: 5/4/2023 2:49:00 PM
Paula, thank you so much for the congratulations and compliment !
Date: 5/2/2023 1:28:00 AM
This was truly beautiful, Constance, your thoughts merge with mine:) congratulations, enjoyed our collab:)
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Constance La France
Date: 5/4/2023 2:50:00 PM
Jo, thank you so much for the contest and my placement abd for the compliment and congratulations !
Date: 4/4/2023 2:21:00 PM
Oh, this is wonderful! Like Andrea, I can't see there are two poets here! That's a compliment to both of you!
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Constance La France
Date: 4/4/2023 3:14:00 PM
Ann, thank you so much for the compliment and comment !
Date: 4/4/2023 1:00:00 PM
gosh this is so well done I cannot even tell apart hers from yours. Awesome, Constance!
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Constance La France
Date: 4/4/2023 3:16:00 PM
Andrea, thank you so much for the compliment, I worked hard to match her Stanza One exactly, I hope she likes it !

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