Ripple 2

Indistinct tremors whisper over my skin, I'm lost in the echo. A Ripple To Me 2 Poetry Contest 17th February 2023 Sponsored by: JCB Brul 1st place

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Brian Sambourne

Date: 2/23/2023 11:42:00 AM

Excellent Monoku! Such tremors here that touch the soul. Congratulations! Brian

Di11y Da11y
Date: 2/23/2023 12:06:00 PM

Thank you! Glad you liked it:)

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 2/22/2023 1:14:00 AM

just superb; congrats for superb 1stplacement

Di11y Da11y
Date: 2/22/2023 1:16:00 AM

Thank you so much for your kind comment

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 2/21/2023 7:22:00 PM

Beautiful! Congratulations on your win, DD

Di11y Da11y
Date: 2/21/2023 10:33:00 PM

Many thanks :)

Fj Thomas

Date: 2/21/2023 9:05:00 AM

Yes, I very much like this one also DD. Two different thoughts in different directions go through my mind, making me reread and think. I love when that happens ;)

Di11y Da11y
Date: 2/21/2023 9:19:00 AM

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. I was pleased when it finally formed as it took a while to find the words.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/20/2023 3:45:00 PM

Yessss, that's how to do it!!!

Di11y Da11y
Date: 2/20/2023 11:09:00 PM

Haha thank you Andrea - I love comments like these :)

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 2/20/2023 7:16:00 AM

Congratulations on your win! :)

Di11y Da11y
Date: 2/20/2023 8:08:00 AM

Thank you Linda, I appreciate your comment :)

C.W. Bryan

Date: 2/20/2023 6:41:00 AM

So good! Great job : )

Di11y Da11y
Date: 2/20/2023 8:08:00 AM

Thanks Corey, totally inspired by yours in the sense I felt freed not to mention the prompt word :)

Valsa George

Date: 2/20/2023 4:02:00 AM

A monoku causing goosebumps. Congratulations DD on your first place win

Di11y Da11y
Date: 2/20/2023 8:10:00 AM

Thank you Valsa, I quite enjoyed having a repeat contest with the same prompt as it meant I could take on board the styles and different approaches of the other poets which I found really inspiring :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 2/20/2023 3:59:00 AM

Lovely, DD, congratulations:)

Di11y Da11y
Date: 2/20/2023 1:34:00 PM

Thank you Jo :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 2/17/2023 10:47:00 PM

Dear Dilly, I adore the emotional and physical aura evoked by the imagery of your expressive monoku. Splendid! Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan

Di11y Da11y
Date: 2/17/2023 11:07:00 PM

Thank you Susan, I had a blank page in front of me for a while this time until I found the words I wanted. I very much appreciate your feedback.