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Right Before My Eyes

Right before my eyes Violets sing in the sweet fragrance of your smile Their beauty enriched by the perfect blossom of your kiss Scented illusions float on whispered winds carrying silent wishes of love to your heart As I sit here in awe of everything that is you, blooming right before my eyes Good morning Soupers

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John Hamilton

Date: 4/18/2017 12:25:00 PM

The title caught my attention, reminds me of the Ian Thomas song of the same title, or the America version re-do. Great song and a great poem, thanks for the memories 1976 was a great year!

Chris Green
Date: 4/18/2017 1:17:00 PM

Thanks so very much John and you are correct, "76" was a great year for music.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 4/12/2017 11:57:00 AM

A bright, effervescent poem, Chris. I love the line ... the perfect blossom of your kiss. You always have a memorable line in your poems. No doubt, you're a master poet of romance. Lovely write, my friend. Love and peace to you.

Chris Green
Date: 4/12/2017 1:07:00 PM

Thanks Freddie for stopping by to read this morning. I'm glad you enjoyed this one. As always I appreciate your visits my friend.

Heidi Sands

Date: 4/12/2017 9:47:00 AM

Beautiful , 'in the moment' writing Chris. Thanks for sharing this positive poetry filled with love that brings such brightness to everyone :)

Chris Green
Date: 4/12/2017 11:18:00 AM

Thank you so very much my friend. Your kindness is always a smile in my day. :)

Emile Pinet

Date: 4/12/2017 9:21:00 AM

Your feelings surface and carry the emotional force behind your words. A touching and eloquent description of love. Emile. #7

Chris Green
Date: 4/12/2017 11:15:00 AM

Thank you so very much my friend. I appreciate your kind comments

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/12/2017 8:02:00 AM

Sigh..

Chris Green
Date: 4/12/2017 11:13:00 AM

Your "sigh" makes me smile. :) Thank you so much my sweet friend.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 4/12/2017 6:59:00 AM

Good morning Chris! It is a gift to rise to your prose :) a lovely piece*peace xomo

Chris Green
Date: 4/12/2017 11:11:00 AM

Thank you Maureen. I am happy you consider my poetry a gift and even more thrilled you enjoyed this one.

Darren White

Date: 4/12/2017 6:52:00 AM

As I sit in awe here, reading your words, every day, how happy I am reading them :) Morning Chris, have a great day!

Chris Green
Date: 4/12/2017 11:10:00 AM

Good morning Darren. I am happy you enjoyed my poem this morning my friend.

Anne-Marie Coreggia

Date: 4/12/2017 6:50:00 AM

Chris, your words, fragrance full, rise and beautifully sing of the budding springtime of love:) Amitiés

Chris Green
Date: 4/12/2017 11:10:00 AM

Thank you so very much Anne Marie. I am happy you stopped by this morning

Tim Smith

Date: 4/12/2017 6:36:00 AM

Beautiful Chris...Have a great day

Chris Green
Date: 4/12/2017 11:09:00 AM

Thanks so much Tim.