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Riding Away To Color

I’ll ride away from city life, from the dingy brown of smog and the mixing in of gray with the white of tule fog. Escaping black of pavement, to New Mexico I’ll stray. With my horse and pack mule, to color I’ll ride away. Through golden mountain passes, I’ll ride to the orange southwest. I’ll camp by the great Grand Canyon, to see which times are best to gaze at its bright red rock, and enjoy it many a day. With my horse and pack mule, to color I’ll ride away. By day, I’ll freely ride beneath the heavens so vast and blue. I’ll say my prayers by light of stars, a sky-full, not just a few. Slow or fast, I’ll mark my path from Rio Grande to Santa Fe. With my horse and pack mule, to color I’ll ride away.

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Date: 2/4/2022 1:44:00 PM
Enjoyed the journey! Thanks for penning this lovely poem.
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Jennifer Fenn
Date: 2/8/2022 1:20:00 PM
Thank you Valerie! Glad I could take you on this trip. Have a blessed day.
Date: 10/4/2021 6:50:00 PM
This is such an amazing piece, Jennifer. You paint such a vivid picture, I can visualize the scenes through your eyes. Excellent! Pandita
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Jennifer Fenn
Date: 10/9/2021 11:07:00 PM
Thank you Pandita! I'm happy you like it! Thank you for visiting me.
Date: 8/29/2021 5:58:00 PM
Really lovely Poem. I felt I was travelling with you...
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Jennifer Fenn
Date: 8/30/2021 1:44:00 PM
Thank you Shirley! So happy you like it!
Date: 3/23/2021 3:22:00 PM
totally awesome and a FAV. You are great Panagiota xx
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Jennifer Fenn
Date: 3/24/2021 1:10:00 PM
Thank you so much Panagiota! That made my day!
Date: 2/19/2021 5:30:00 AM
Wonderful title, Jennifer....and for a few moments I could imagine being on a ride with you among all the colors of nature. Thanks for all your lovely comments. I look forward to reading more of your. SuZ
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Jennifer Fenn
Date: 2/19/2021 7:47:00 AM
Thank you Suzanne! I’ll be reading more of yours too. When I was looking for your Winged Steeds poem yesterday (which I really enjoyed) so many more caught my eye that I couldn’t help but want to look to see what they were about. I was treated to great stuff! Thank you for stopping by and becoming a follower of me.
Date: 2/14/2021 8:38:00 PM
Great idea. Great poem. Truth spoken... In Chicago, I can actually see the sky's color change when going from the first suburb north to Chicago or vice versa. Scary stuff. Kudos, Jennifer. Write on! :) gw
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Jennifer Fenn
Date: 2/15/2021 12:10:00 PM
Thank you Gershon! Why don’t you write about the Chicago’s sky color changing from suburb to suburb? I bet you could write a great one!
Date: 2/11/2021 8:24:00 PM
Excellent poetry. wonderful story that takes one there. love this, Jennifer.
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Jennifer Fenn
Date: 2/13/2021 1:12:00 AM
Thank you Harry! Now I’m going to check out some of yours.
Date: 2/11/2021 7:08:00 PM
Just beautiful, Jennifer! The imagery is grand!
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Jennifer Fenn
Date: 2/13/2021 1:13:00 AM
Thank you Kim! So glad you like this!
Date: 2/4/2021 7:50:00 AM
Hi Jennifer, Congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis
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Jennifer Fenn
Date: 2/6/2021 9:50:00 PM
Thank you Alexis! You wrote a great one yourself. Glad to meet you!
Date: 2/4/2021 6:40:00 AM
I love the repetitive last lines of each stanza Jennifer and the references to the different colors. Awesome and a fav for me. :) Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Jennifer Fenn
Date: 2/6/2021 9:51:00 PM
Thank you Linda! A fav for you? Cool! That makes my evening!
Date: 2/2/2021 8:40:00 PM
Terrific! Your poem takes us on a journey into the evocative images of the southwest and this permits us to reconnect with our true persona. Well done! Keep writing Jennifer because you have something important to tell us.
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Jennifer Fenn
Date: 2/3/2021 5:07:00 PM
Thank you Thomas! Now that made my evening!
Date: 1/29/2021 11:15:00 AM
You surely have a lot of colorful descriptiveness packed into this write.
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Jennifer Fenn
Date: 2/2/2021 1:05:00 PM
Thank you Robert! Now I’m going to read something of yours!
Date: 1/29/2021 7:22:00 AM
Brought back happy memories Jennifer, a few years ago I flew over the grand canyon, would love to do a tour on horseback. Enjoy your weekend. Tom
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Jennifer Fenn
Date: 1/29/2021 11:14:00 AM
Thank you Tom! I visited there for one day on my way back from the balloon festival in Albuquerque and a mule ride down into the canyon is on my bucket list too. Have great weekend likewise!

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