Ride of the Daystar: Har - Magedon

A great tumult has occurred in the sea
agitated waves tussle and brawl in the sea

A sea, whose waters are parted,
parted by a swarming multitude of beasts, and one Great Beast

Beast, I advise you, there is a King, a Star in the Day
riding upon a white horse, Eminent and August
	
August and Purposed was His way
sword in hand, fetters in one

One, without uncertainly, He rode toward the sea
and with certainty His strike was dealt

Dealt, the waters were parted
by means of one blow all the beasts were smite

Smitten, all but one, the Lord of the beasts
the Daystar turned his strength to the Great Beast

The Beast, skilled and adept, was struck with one articulation 
not with a song of death as its intent, but a rebuking

Rebuked, so it might not agitate the waters
fettered, so it could not provoke the sea

See now, the waters were parted
the bodies of which were two

Two parts, divided by the Daystar’s blow
one to the south and toward the north was one

One, agitated, heavy with salt, and broad as elapsed dreams
the North, tranquil and fresh. just adequate to chalice in the palms

Palms firm, the King turned His day heat to the south
and the waters evaporated, so that only pillars of salt remained

Remaining, the Daystar blessed his radiance on the North
with palms the King cupped the unsullied waters 

Waters in hand He tossed them into the desiccated earth
and the waters revitalized the salted land in support of the King

And the King continued to shed light on the waters for a thousand years
for a millennium, the earth blossomed.

Blossomed for a time, a time, times five hundred times
after which, the fetters would be loosed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2005



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Date: 4/4/2017 5:56:00 PM
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Date: 1/2/2010 7:43:00 AM
holy wow mark been awhile since seen your work congrats on a well deserve showw loved the imagery thanks for sharing
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Date: 1/2/2010 3:28:00 AM
Hi Mark, I have never read the book 'God, Heaven and Har Magedon, but your vivid portrayal entices me to do so . Thank you for sharing. Lainie
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Date: 12/29/2009 7:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Mark. I wish you the best with your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/28/2009 3:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your fine poem being featured this week, Happy New Year >> James
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Date: 9/13/2008 12:34:00 PM
hi Mark I like this write it reminds me of when we studied ou the The Revelation Book, The Great Climax, great intuitive write, take care D-nyce
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