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Ride a Speckled Horse

Ride a Speckled Horse Half Moon Bay A little speckled grey How unwilling you were But I'd rented you that day No cajoling and no show of force Could lift your heart to run Weren't you used- to- always being, abused by everyone ? In shame, at that slap of reins across your neck I let go - content to feel the rythm of your walk and not the rocking of your canter Turned your jaded head toward a trail down to the sea Smelt the salt air with you and felt the wide expanse of beach and wind on me Under the gulls glide your gait became wide And like a rocking horse beside the rolling sea, you and I glided, close to eternity I could have cantered on forever when you gave your heart to me And though I'm sure, that many tried It's few I know, have ever felt, the magic of your stride

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/31/2016 4:14:00 PM
I enjoy your respect and love for horses. To be able to be in the moment and enjoy the stride and rhythm of such a beautiful animal. The phrase stop to smell the roses, doesn't mean you have to stop in order to smell the roses. Thank you for this right it was well into it.
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Date: 9/11/2013 9:52:00 AM
My Dearest Suzanne, Xegrakio POETESS, Beozakul-Oychwa (Spirit Nurse) Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. I have missed YOU so much. I am reading YOUR Magnificent Contributions to the SOUP again I see Congratulations are in order For YOUR Superb Featured POEM : " Ride a Speckled Horse " Soup Mail Call I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...Harry
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Date: 6/22/2013 5:38:00 PM
I could just picture this beautiful scene....and almost feel the wind in my face. Ahhh......that was a nice ride!!!
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Date: 6/22/2013 12:52:00 PM
It was a nice ride. Congrats thanks for submitting! Kim
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Date: 6/22/2013 11:42:00 AM
I enjoyed the ride. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/22/2013 9:21:00 AM
Ms. Delaney, You have fashioned a really wonderful account of the relationship between horse and rider. I envy your controlling reins on this magnificent beast. You ride well, my dear.... Hugs. and congrats... Jake
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Date: 6/9/2013 12:21:00 AM
Suz, Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-) Take care, and enjoy your wonderful days ahead . Always & Forever! **LINDA**
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Date: 6/8/2013 5:36:00 AM
its gud,its better ..............its jst wow.Simple words with instant connect :)
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Date: 4/5/2013 9:17:00 PM
Dear Suzanne,YOU know when a horse feels YOUR essence, he will please YOU for YOUR feelings of kindness to him.Do YOU live on a ranch or Horse farm? YOU certainly know about riding.Superb Pen.With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry
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Date: 4/3/2013 2:02:00 PM
Hope you considered entering this one in the Wild, Wild West contest. I really love the flow. You can hear the canter rhythm in this one, which I'm sure was your intention. Great imagery!
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Date: 3/26/2013 10:29:00 AM
I like how this poem emphasises the little things; the scenery, the feelings of horse and rider, etc. These give it a realistic and charming feel.
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Date: 3/25/2013 9:17:00 PM
You are a masterful story teller, my dear new friend! I am really impressed with the flow of your poetry. I'm sure this has been a passion of yours for quite a long while... I'm certain you're not new to the art! Kudos SuZ! Hugs, Jack xox
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Date: 3/25/2013 9:55:00 AM
I enjoyed read this one Suzanne, it was well written and complex. Great discriptions of the speckled horse.
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 3/25/2013 10:40:00 AM
Thanks Donald: It is about a true experience and this dear little horse was like riding a rocking horse once he decided to canter....sometimes we have to be patient to experience the sublime I hope this came through in the poem. Best, SuZ

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