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Riddles on Brambled Path

Written: January 24, 2025 For contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ In the galumph of morning breath a chandelier of dew, Barely inching through the cobwebs dreams hammock in gleaming light A jaded heart finds solace in this tangled respite, Lummox magpies whisper tales crisp with truth renewed. Magic twilight dolphins swim through esoteric skies, Flummoxed by the palette hues purple crocus and yellow celandine, Surly winds sweep through vastness where shadows intertwine Trapped beneath a cloak of darkness spying on sighs. Brambled paths lead to riddles a sharp needle piercing skin, Bleak wilderness unfolds its wings reckless thoughts bear flight, In abyssal thrall to katabatic winds that howl at night, Fodder for desolation grip where slithy worms start. A reckoning draft reasons in cosmic dust and glowing flame, Juggling shadows and whispers with each breath eternity bestows, Bright brambling duets waltzing where sapphire waters flow, Obsession's echoes in an alder tarn untamed by shame. Straddling the edge precariously puckered lips exhale pure art, the trickster stalks among obsidian trees weaving lucid dreams unraveled tight; a goldfinch’s trill alchemizes into hope’s flickering candlelight - each note dissolving petulance from placid hearts in these moments as I wander through the glistening morning hue surmounting plummet throes where orchids boost raw life on a hopeless slope.

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Date: 1/30/2025 8:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. As a young child I did not want a dog as a pet, I wanted dolphins. Have a blessed day with your win as you write away..................
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Date: 1/29/2025 3:01:00 AM
- Wooow ... congratulations on your top win with this wonderful poem, Las :) - hugs
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Date: 1/26/2025 10:49:00 AM
Some people stand out. You are one of those. I enjoyed reading - this is very powerful.
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Date: 1/26/2025 9:35:00 AM
Your imagery is fantastic. The magpies whisper tales. Wish I could have heard them. All in all, truly magnificent.
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Date: 1/26/2025 8:03:00 AM
SP, I with you that understanding the truth is not an easy proposition. Changing the way we think about things does involve changing thought patterns and that sometimes does feel like being pricked by a bramble The way you describe the tumult of this process makes me smile. Thanks!!
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Date: 1/26/2025 3:03:00 AM
As one wanders through brambled paths early in the morning, he sees a 'chandelier of dew' (what a splendid description!) inching through cobwebs. He hears magpies' whispering tales. The skies with dolphin like clouds sailing along is another scintillating sight. The goldfinches sitting on tress....and similar scenes of raw life. You alone can describe these ordinary scenes in such splendid vocabulary and esoteric images. Reading your poems is a learning experience, though I can never emulate your style. Simply superb!
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Date: 1/25/2025 4:27:00 PM
Magic twilight dolphins swim through esoteric skies… In abyssal thrall to katabatic winds that howl at night…enjoed the imagery, Lasaad!
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Date: 1/25/2025 10:03:00 AM
Wow, Sir Sotto! You've used words and imagery here that will have me glued to my dictionary for the next several days if not weeks! But if you intended to write something exceptionally thought provoking, uplifting and unique, then you've scored a home run with bases loaded! "Well done" is a pathetically attempted understatement. Write on, Terrell
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Date: 1/24/2025 11:29:00 PM
Such profound diction dr sotto, and such creative metaphors and imagery painted throughout this well written poem! I love the unique words youv woven in here like “ flummoxed “ “ brambling duets” “ lummox magpies “ how clever and different! Words we dont read everyday in poems youv woven in such an eloquent manner! I also love the ending here and how youv delivered this poem and how theres so much expressed throughout in such a seamless manner! Pleasure aways reading your poems.Sending you light
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Date: 1/24/2025 7:53:00 PM
Enchanting are the beasts that dwell in nature's scapes, where weary moods whisper. The Imagery is rapturous ! Soul stirring
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