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Richie's Wedding

My nephew Richie finally took a bride Down the aisle she did gracefully glide Radiant was Erin standing by his side But my sister-in-law just cried and cried “Why?” I asked, as her tears I dried My brother’s eyes too flowed like the tide “This is our last one to wed,” Artie said He seemed overcome by a sense of dread “And now it is hard for us to look ahead Richie helped us out, home projects he led My back always hurts, he even pulled out our bed He de-iced the stairs when it was dangerous to tread” “Please wish him well,” I said, “as he leaves the nest, For 30 years by his presence you’ve been blessed” Artie smiled down and as you may have guessed He pulled a white hanky from his tuxedo vest “I have six children, and I do miss the rest But Richie, you see, cared for us the best” My brother, however, found a way to shake the blues After the wedding, he and his wife took a cruise Raising six kids had left his bank account bruised He’d taken them to playgrounds, but trips he couldn’t choose Now an empty nester, he had nothing more to lose And finally he could afford a new pair of shoes *For Dr. Ram's "Wedding" Contest. Richie was married July 30, 2010.

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Date: 10/1/2010 5:01:00 AM
Wow lol second one of yours ive read today that you had a win with ... congrates again smile love Jayne x x x
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Date: 9/27/2010 8:53:00 AM
"Big Congratulations! Way to go Lady you're in the big time lattely. Enyoy your excellent win! Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/27/2010 6:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your 1st Place win Carolyn in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "Epithalamium" Love,Carol
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Date: 9/19/2010 2:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your 1st place in Dr. Ram's contest Carolyn. This made me smile all over again, love Wilma
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Date: 9/19/2010 8:55:00 AM
Such a sweet story, it is how shows the real family emotion of a day like this....the effect it can have on everyone, each in a different way. Congratulations Carolyn, a fine win!! love, Carrie
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Date: 9/19/2010 8:01:00 AM
A big "Ace" Congratulations Carolyn on your excellant poem's presentation. Enjoy your bounty of success. Big Smile, Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/19/2010 7:04:00 AM
Mega congratulations Carolyn with your first place in Dr.Ram wonderful contest. Hope your having a great time in Disney World >> James ;)
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Date: 9/19/2010 6:19:00 AM
Congratulations, Carolyn for your first place win in my contest
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Date: 8/15/2010 5:49:00 PM
great thoughts!! We have to constantly change to meet the new stages in our lives.
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Date: 8/15/2010 4:06:00 PM
Hi Carolyn, I was wondering how you spell Reeses You call it candy we call it chocolate But on any language it tasted pretty darn good , Night e god bless
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Date: 8/15/2010 3:57:00 PM
Hi Carolyn I never got my fathers hair unfortunately that is why my head is bare but my nieces no one can touch they were blessed with the best of all of us. Speaking of impressions I can do an amazing tumble weed . Cheers for reading
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Date: 8/15/2010 2:23:00 PM
Hi Carolyn I you were the horse then we must have met before , Shame on you for not recognising me, I was the horses ass. Cheers
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Date: 8/15/2010 11:31:00 AM
Awesome memories you penned for Dr. Ram's contest Carolyn, all the best to you.. Thank you for undertaking to catch me whenever I fall, hope you are having a stunning Sunday, love Wilma
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Date: 8/15/2010 10:36:00 AM
very nice good luck in the contest good to see you are still writing wonderful poetry I need to catch up give me a little time have a super weekend faleshia
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Date: 8/14/2010 9:08:00 PM
Great poem, but when the grand children arrive it is always a new family to bring up all over again ; )
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Date: 8/14/2010 5:32:00 PM
Thanks for supporting my contest, Carolyn. I have already entered "Double Limerick" contest.
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Date: 8/14/2010 5:20:00 PM
Smile ~ And as far as Richie dear; he sounds and seems like such a wonderful young man also ~ "Beautiful Poem Carolyne; With Even A Touch of Wisdom I See, To Be Found Amid Its Love Composed Prose" ~ "My Love & Warmth to You Always & Forever," John! ~ Smile, "Have The Most Beautiful of Evenings, 'Beyond Precious & Lovely, Carolyn Devonshire;'" Bye Dear!:) ~
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Date: 8/14/2010 5:15:00 PM
Smile ~ And also I wish to "Thank You Precious Carolyn," for "Your" kind com dear; always warms the heart ~ And admirable Artie; to raise six children while sacrificing his own; while as he did I am certain, the very best that he could; and he sounds like such a very wonderful man; tender-hearted and filled it seems, with genuine love ~ Smile, and how very kind of "Your Bright Dear," to compose such a beautiful verse, from "Your Priceless Hearts" own love for he ~ ....Cont:)
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Date: 8/14/2010 5:09:00 PM
Smile ~ "You" made me smile "Dear Beautiful & Precious Carolyn Devonshire" ~ This seems to be a more than not lighter side of "Your Wonderful Giftedness Dear Lady" which I am delighted to view and read; soo much brighter it seems than the moment from yerterdays profoundly stirring verse ~ Smile, I hope that "Your Treasures" are doing beautifully today dear; as I am sure that "You" already know that I Always have ~ ....Cont:)
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Date: 8/14/2010 3:55:00 PM
Good luck in the contest with this one..I know the feelings that your kin were going through..The last child to do all the growing up items like starting to school, going to college, getting married,etc..is so gut wrenching..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 8/14/2010 3:21:00 PM
p.s. thanks for the comments on my Haiku please don't send any sunshine, its 34 celsius out and we are frying , what we need is rain
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Date: 8/14/2010 3:09:00 PM
that was so nice, good luck in the contest
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Date: 8/14/2010 3:00:00 PM
Awesome Rhyme my friend....Good Luck in the contest.....Larry
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