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Revenant

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Dank darkness was always settled around. It was all I knew of the near universe. Stale, stifling, suffocating in my broken and spilt trundle leaving bitter, morbidly clammy earth enshrouding my body and being. A crack in the soil, or in time perhaps. Slivers of light split the filthy floor, crawled over ornate catafalque, and continued its approach, like winter's blinding ice, to my exposed bones. Warming flesh grew and coursed with new - life blood.

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Mat Ignacio

Date: 10/27/2023 7:30:00 PM

great unraveling of consciousness - glad i came across this one.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/28/2023 7:01:00 AM

Hello Mat. Nice to see you here. I also am glad you came across my poem. Many thanks for your kind words! :)

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 10/13/2023 5:09:00 AM

a very well written double etheree..congrats on your win in the contest :)

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/13/2023 7:44:00 AM

Many thanks Charlotte. I appreciate you taking time to read and comment so nicely! Linda :)

Hilo Poet

Date: 10/12/2023 8:13:00 PM

Linda, omgosh! I consider the 'Etheree' format rather too complex to tackle, yet you did this form effortlessly. My hat's off to your well-deserved win, my friend! Aloha, William

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/13/2023 7:43:00 AM

Mahala William. I find the Etheree challenging and engaging. I like writing them occasionally. Thank you for stopping by and brightening my day! hugs :)

Janice Canerdy

Date: 10/12/2023 1:44:00 PM

Linda, your poem vividly describes a downtrodden person finding joy in life once again. CONGRATS. Janice

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/12/2023 6:45:00 PM

Many thanks friend Janice! :)

Joseph May

Date: 10/12/2023 10:04:00 AM

Very nicely written Linda, Congrats on your win

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/12/2023 10:05:00 AM

Thank you Joseph. :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/12/2023 9:58:00 AM

Well written Etheree… and creative. Congratulations on your well written poem, Linda.. hugs

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/12/2023 10:05:00 AM

Thank you Las my friend. hugs! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/11/2023 11:19:00 AM

- Creative ... well done ... like this a lot, Linda :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/12/2023 8:16:00 AM

Thank you dear sweet Anne-Lise! :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/11/2023 10:47:00 AM

Congratulations!

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/12/2023 8:15:00 AM

Thanks my friend!

Ink Empress

Date: 10/11/2023 10:36:00 AM

Dark intriguing and moving etheree, well written and delivered. And what a pictur too to go with this write. Great wordplay throughout. Pleasure reading this. Congratulations

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/12/2023 8:15:00 AM

Many thanks Inky. I enjoyed playing in your fun contest! :)