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8/22/2024 for H Form - Hybronnet Poetry Contest sponsored by Constance La France

A child, I, when you touched my heart and mind, so meaningful, but also undefined. Like faerie dust, you left me behind. There, my unceasing, lifelong search began. Inside songs and art, I hoped to catch it, seeking the poetic words to match it, But from the thin air, I could not snatch it. 'Twas teasingly, from me, you skipped and ran. I looked for you in a girl's touch and smile, in nature's every teeming sunlit mile. You nimbly eluded me all the while. Ephemeral sprite, I'm a beaten man. Oh, please visit me soon, my long-lost friend, or we'll both be dust blowing in the wind.

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Date: 10/1/2024 7:14:00 AM
David, congratulations on your win in my Hybronnet contest, lovely poem, Constance
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David Crandall
Date: 10/1/2024 9:19:00 PM
Thanks Constance!
Date: 9/20/2024 8:22:00 AM
I've read your winning work and am delighted to see it in the list of honor. Way to go. Congratulations. Sara K
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David Crandall
Date: 9/20/2024 4:09:00 PM
Thank you Sara!
Date: 8/23/2024 6:34:00 PM
This is a great poem . I wonder who she was that eluded you. Perhaps a great tease? I guess she was the faster runner.
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David Crandall
Date: 8/23/2024 8:51:00 PM
Thanks. I think I could have caught her if I had a good pair of running shoes!
Date: 8/23/2024 4:02:00 AM
I love this! A lovely rhythm. Especially love verse 3. Great hybronnet, Batman! (if you get the reference)
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David Crandall
Date: 8/23/2024 9:39:00 AM
Thanks Kim! Of course, I get the reference - Robin must be your alter ego!

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