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Resurrection

Little brown orb lying so lightly in my hand, the marvel of you demanding my attention. Could I but see deep into your heart, I would find a perfectly formed flower waiting there. Waiting for me to stir the rich brown earth and make a bed, a room to hold you through the winter storms. What life force induces you to grow and not decay in your dark tomb? Who guides you? Lovingly I cradle you and croon a lullaby. Your fragile skin splits and bares your creamy flesh, seemingly much too delicate to survive the frosts and heaves to come. I place you there. Sleep little one. In hibernation let the good earth nourish you. Your internal clock, set by Nature, will waken you to spring; triumphantly breaking free, a lovely tulip blossom. Won 7th place in contest Anything But rhyme.

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Date: 2/24/2011 10:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Joyce in Debbie Guzzi's contest "Anything But Rhyme". Love, Carol
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Date: 2/18/2011 11:06:00 AM
Another amazing write from you Joyce!Congrats on your well deserved win -----kashinath
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Date: 2/17/2011 9:34:00 PM
Joyce, I know that you don't consider yourself free verse writer (same as me) but I LOVE this kind of free verse writing. You sparkle at it! Congratulations on this beautiful poem making the act of seed planting such a special event. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 2/16/2011 10:33:00 PM
What a very sweet write, Joyce -- really enjoyed how you "speak" to the bulb here-- Congrats on this very endearing write :)
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Date: 2/16/2011 9:27:00 PM
shimmering, joyce! happy for your great win the contest! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/16/2011 4:37:00 PM
Congratulations on the seventh place win in the contest, Joyce
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Date: 2/16/2011 1:54:00 PM
I love the thought of this potential bloom being in hibernation....waiting for the right moment to spring free! Lovely poem Joyce!!
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Date: 7/8/2010 7:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your success in the contest, Joyce! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/8/2010 6:59:00 AM
Congratulations Joyce on your win in Joe Flach's contest "A Poem That Doesn't Rhyme". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/7/2010 3:20:00 PM
Very beautiful Joyce. Congratulations on your most well deserved win. Thank you always for your most thoughtful and kind comments. You are such a sweetheart. hugs, shar xoxo
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Date: 7/7/2010 11:25:00 AM
I love this, Joyce, My congratulations to you on your HM. This also goes to my favs. today! Audrey
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Date: 7/7/2010 10:34:00 AM
Sweet unrhymed poem and deserving of the winner circle, Joyce! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 7/4/2010 12:43:00 AM
wow,, good entry for the contest,, good luck.. and have a nice 4th of july weekend...P.D.
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Date: 7/3/2010 2:17:00 PM
Such beauty in your words.. a lovely piece Joyce and good luck in Joe's free verse contest.. I entered Crystallized Coterie about a frozen set of lovers.. what else? luv passion and more luv in my life these days.. along with vacation.. so am enjoying.. with luv ..good luck.. "Sweetheart" ..AlohA
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Date: 7/3/2010 2:04:00 PM
How tenderly you caress this tulip bulb, Joyce, knowing the beauty it will bring in early spring. These bulbs do seem to have an "internal clock" and it's amazing how they remain alive through harsh winters. A wonderful entry for Joe's contest! Love, Carolyn
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