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Resting

Where do her dreams take her, beauty with hair of gold? Does she dance among the stars tonight or dwell in a fantasy of passion? Will she open her eyes if I call to her or linger in a celestial plane? I stroke long hair cascading down her ebony gown, but she does not flinch. Even as I lay my hands upon hers, this beauty’s eyes do not flutter. Indeed, she rests in peace, not even breathing it seems. Please tell me, gilded lady, Is this an eternal repose? *Written May 14, 2014

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Date: 5/27/2014 12:52:00 PM
Very tender and beautiful words, Carolyn. I felt like I wanted to whisper them, so I wouldn't wake her up.... This a very creative take on the painting. I never had the thought that she could be "resting in peace"!.... Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 5/26/2014 10:28:00 PM
Hi Carolyn: Congratulations on your first place win Excellent interpretation of the painting. Luv <*_* > SuZ
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Date: 5/26/2014 7:18:00 PM
Congratulations on this beautiful entry. A well-deserved win!
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Date: 5/26/2014 6:23:00 PM
Congratulations, Carolyn. Beautiful win.
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Date: 5/26/2014 2:33:00 PM
I guess we are meant to feel this way. congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 5/26/2014 8:15:00 AM
I read it the same as you did..an"eternal repose"...good one LNC. Congrats. BG
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Date: 5/26/2014 7:47:00 AM
Congrats on a great win Carolyn...
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Date: 5/25/2014 9:24:00 AM
This is so melancholic...but everyone has it time to depart in this world. Sad but well written.
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Date: 5/17/2014 5:32:00 PM
Great write Carolyn... good luck in the contest
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Date: 5/17/2014 2:59:00 PM
Carolyn, this is a 7 rating for me and a fav; love the personification; blissfully at rest. who would want it to end! :) // paul
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Date: 5/26/2014 3:48:00 PM
...and congratulations on a merited win!!
Date: 5/15/2014 12:48:00 PM
Very deep, unique write Carolyn; your first stanza really grabs, and the rest sets a wonderful, graceful result Faving this Carolyn!
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Date: 5/15/2014 9:25:00 AM
Hi Carolyn, nice to know you: Rest personified in the beauty of a woman with gold hair in a black gown. A colorful rest. Great Poem! my compliments.
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