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Resolved, a Lack of Resolve

quatrain Resolved to quit, a collection betrays my dear Mona. Hers are the ones marked by colorful stain. Her obsession likens her to my aging Smith-Corona. It’s coughing just now as if in great pain. Its lungs store a shiny bobble divorced from Mona's ear, three of her Lucky Strikes all out of smoke… My functional machine has other favorite souvenirs including a guarded flight stub, no joke. She was a stewardess, last year when I met my sweet “Mo” and I became her first passenger goof. That is, the first one on whom she spilled a hot cup of joe. My versatile cabinet holds the proof. Mona needs to smoke; she is addicted to nicotine. Maybe she’ll change brands when I light her fuse. Two new keepsakes - ads from both Life and Post magazine claim, “Camels, the brand which more doctors choose.” set in this 1930-40's era, this piece focuses on the cigarette industry. http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC1470496/

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Date: 12/20/2014 6:22:00 AM
- Hey .... a Christmas smile to you, Reason :) - Luck in contest ! - I wish you and your family a peaceful and lovely Christmas - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/21/2014 8:03:00 PM
Thanks for the Christmas wishes and the smile...love your avatar, a special little someone in your family? I wish you peace and joy this Christmas too as you celebrate Christ's birth.
Date: 12/20/2014 5:43:00 AM
I like how you juggled everything here. Brilliant control, but not too tight.
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Date: 12/21/2014 8:06:00 PM
Thanks, Rob, appreciate your comment. Have a fine holiday with those you love the most.

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