Resolved, a Lack of Resolve

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Resolved to quit, a collection betrays my dear Mona.
Hers are the ones marked by colorful stain.
Her obsession likens her to my aging Smith-Corona.
It’s coughing just now as if in great pain.

Its lungs store a shiny bobble divorced from Mona's ear,
three of her Lucky Strikes all out of smoke… 
My functional machine has other favorite souvenirs
including a guarded flight stub, no joke. 

She was a stewardess, last year when I met my sweet “Mo”
and I became her first passenger goof.
That is, the first one on whom she spilled a hot cup of joe.
My versatile cabinet holds the proof.

Mona needs to smoke; she is addicted to nicotine.
Maybe she’ll change brands when I light her fuse.
Two new keepsakes - ads from both Life and Post magazine
claim, “Camels, the brand which more doctors choose.” 


set in this 1930-40's era, this piece focuses on the cigarette industry.
http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC1470496/

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 12/20/2014 6:22:00 AM
- Hey .... a Christmas smile to you, Reason :) - Luck in contest ! - I wish you and your family a peaceful and lovely Christmas - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/21/2014 8:03:00 PM
Thanks for the Christmas wishes and the smile...love your avatar, a special little someone in your family? I wish you peace and joy this Christmas too as you celebrate Christ's birth.
Date: 12/20/2014 5:43:00 AM
I like how you juggled everything here. Brilliant control, but not too tight.
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Date: 12/21/2014 8:06:00 PM
Thanks, Rob, appreciate your comment. Have a fine holiday with those you love the most.
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