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----------- --------- sunset vanishes etching traces of his face my breath cold as dew quivers with pained requiem... through autumn’s first interlude ------------- Lament A Tanka Contest for Rick Parise 9/29/2016

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J.W. Earnings

Date: 11/21/2016 6:52:00 AM

Amazing tanka poem! (: Glad I read this masterpiece. Take care ^_^ -JWE PS: a 7/7 for sure!

J.W. Earnings

Date: 11/21/2016 6:52:00 AM

Sorry! Forgot to rate! (: Beautifully written

Kash Poet

Date: 10/2/2016 1:02:00 PM

Beautifully penned tanka.Love it!

Moon Flower

Date: 10/2/2016 5:09:00 AM

Simply beautiful as always. Congrats on your placement, Nette. ;)

Laura Leiser

Date: 10/1/2016 11:45:00 PM

Wonderful lament, Nette! Congrats on your win :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/1/2016 7:04:00 PM

wow, you wrote a gorgeous lament, Nette BIG congrats on your well deserved win.

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/1/2016 5:27:00 PM

Hi Nette, This so sad and well written. Congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis

Sandra Haight

Date: 10/1/2016 4:11:00 PM

Very sad lamentation imaged in your well written Tanka, Nette. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Charlie Smith

Date: 10/1/2016 3:20:00 PM

Lovely work Nette, congratulations...

Samiha Zubair

Date: 10/1/2016 11:04:00 AM

Beautifully penned down terrain of passion oozing from the words.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/1/2016 12:26:00 AM

You captured the emotions, again, so beautiful, even filled with melancholy!

Paul Callus

Date: 9/30/2016 3:21:00 PM

Excellent, Nette! A lament Tanka, but a joy to read! #7+ Hugs // paul

Constance La France

Date: 9/30/2016 8:42:00 AM

Nette this is a lovely tanka of lament ~

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/29/2016 11:56:00 AM

- Beautiful with lovely sentiment, Nette - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Manny Paras

Date: 9/29/2016 9:48:00 AM

Breezing through the site and got stunned by this incredible poem--- tormenting and yet engrossing. I might take a shot at it. Thank you!

Manny Paras
Date: 9/29/2016 9:50:00 AM

7 +

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/29/2016 8:33:00 AM

your sure living this nette, so real, a picture for the soul..

Tim Smith

Date: 9/29/2016 8:10:00 AM

I can feel this poem as I had to put on a sweatshirt this morning. Great Tanka nette

Probir Gupta

Date: 9/29/2016 7:35:00 AM

Touchingly beautiful ...

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/29/2016 7:26:00 AM

Next time I watch the sunset will keep your poem in mind for to embellish the sunset itself dear, nette! A seven!

Casarah Nance

Date: 9/29/2016 5:37:00 AM

impressive lines, my heart cold as dew quivers with pained requiem really speaks with intensity, your descriptions are so unique and awe inspiring.