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reflection is my sanctuary,   a place to savor
  time while twirling tender thoughts gently
                         in my mind -
           embracing excitement within,
                       and this sweet taste    of love                  

      
           but  at this moment,
                        i long to   r e p l a y  
                 a familiar tune
                               on a vintage turntable 
                          
                                ________
                           
                      while thinking of you
                          _____________

                            
                  somehow   it brings me closer,
             so curl around me and  s t a y 
                                  ---*---

               
               
                ~ ~  because we belong  ~ ~  
                     in rhyme and in song 

_______________ (PoetrySoup Format) _______________ reflection is my sanctuary, a place to savor time while twirling tender thoughts gently in my mind - embracing excitement within, and this sweet taste of love but at this moment, i long to r e p l a y a familiar tune on a vintage turntable ________ while thinking of you _____________ somehow it brings me closer, so curl around me and s t a y ---*--- ~ ~ because we belong ~ ~ in rhyme and in song

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Date: 7/12/2025 8:33:00 PM
Always worth the wait.... magical piece, BL.
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Date: 7/11/2025 8:08:00 PM
Sweetly romantic and sensual, your trademark. So what vintage tune is swirling around your head of late? Any hints?
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/12/2025 10:03:00 AM
@Keith, ' I'm not too sexy for my shirt. ' Oh, and I'm smiling and blushing at the reference to Jessica Rabbit. :)
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/12/2025 9:45:00 AM
Always romantic and sweet. Sensual too. That's just me. :) As far as what tune is lingering in my mind, a moment of ' I get weak, and, ' I'm lost in your eyes. ' Just to name a few. :)
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Keith D Trestrail
Date: 7/12/2025 6:29:00 AM
Hmm, no offence but you’re not exactly Jessica Rabbit the way she does her little turn on the catwalk. Brandy, help me out here.
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/12/2025 5:09:00 AM
Hey, that's my song!
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Keith D Trestrail
Date: 7/11/2025 8:44:00 PM
Ooh, I know! “I’m too sexy for my shirt, so sexy it hurts”…
Date: 7/11/2025 7:58:00 PM
It's wonderful to see a new post from you! This is gorgeous work, truly and deeply - <3 I admire your voice so much.
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/12/2025 9:36:00 AM
You can't see me, but I'm blushing right now. :) Thank you so much Paige, for saying you enjoy reading my words and that you admire my voice. Your kind words bring a smile. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 7/11/2025 7:42:00 PM
Aw, so gentle, tranquil and beautiful! Isn't it amazing how music transports us to other times? I miss my old turntable, I loved our collection of vinals and there was something so magical about watching the needle in the grooves as the turntable gently spun, captured music and song joyfully vibrating through mega speakers :) <3
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/12/2025 9:34:00 AM
Music truly inspires me, in so many wonderful ways. I enjoy being swept away to another time and place. So surreal indeed, watching the needle move while the tune escapes. My father still has many of his records. Maybe you need to get you another turntable, my dear friend. :) Thank you do much B.J. for your lovely comment. Your thoughts are appreciated. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

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