Remembrance

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Remembrance Keep my words with you, to be remembered, Lock it within your heart, and hold the key, Your heart is where, my words will be treasured, Keep my words with you, to be remembered, My time is short, my days have been numbered, When I am gone, unlock and release me, Keep my words with you, to be remembered, Lock it within your heart, and hold the key. Submitted: 2020 June 12 BRIAN'S select D,any form,any theme Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/15/2019 6:25:00 PM

This is beautiful William. Must have been some technical reason why it did not make the winner's list? I love it! xxoo : )

Hilo Poet
Date: 5/15/2019 6:33:00 PM

Andrea had just posted the 'Triolet Contest' she had sponsored, but I didn't see it on my available list, yep, methinks 'tis a glitch too--c'est la vie (Hawaiian translation unavailable, not rated PG sorry), Aloha wk