Remembering When
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Years ago that young love did flow..Time has brought a comfortable love and hoping that we never have to part..Sara
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Remembering when we were very young
You were straight, tall, handsome
Love was in the bud and thoughts turned to only you
Remembering when "I" thought of you with sighs
Remembering when "miss" described your absence
Remembering only "him" when it comes to kisses, hugs
Remember saying "in" into my heart forever
Remembering when "the" kisses were long
Remembering the "weeping" when you went away
Remembering not one "of" many, only you
Remembering now "the" comfortable love
Remembering now "rain" when you are away
Contest: Middle Of The Road
Sponsor: HGarvey Daniel Esquire
Written by: Sara Kendrick
Quoted line from Edna St. Vincent Millay
Copyright © Sara Kendrick | Year Posted 2012
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