Remembering When

In the misty glow of my memory
    are luminous fireflies
and a sunset that turned a red thread
    on the horizon
left as a token of a moment in time
When love was you and I was a flame,
shining on the shadow of your needs

Why does the memory of you haunt me so?
Is it a desire to feel my soul float endlessly again
or relive our passion for human endeavor
    that warmed the night
When we abandoned the world
and laid upon a starry hill
    wrapped in sighs
from the tender tendrils of love
that drifted away on whispers of moonbeams
    giving form to our silhouette
merging with a glowing sky
Where a star fell, crossing the horizon
    etching a trail
burning an image into our eyes
    leaving a sense of awe and wonder
in a moment of perfection
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Carmack Avatar
April 30, 2026 at 4:44 PM
Back to say congratulations with your win in Daniel's contest. Glad he liked this just like I did when I first read it.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 27, 2025 at 6:52 AM
Remembering the passion…lovely! Congrats on POTW!
Kauffman Avatar
August 25, 2025 at 12:59 PM
A picture so romantic wrapped in beautiful images that set a scene on a "starry hill" beneath a "glowing sky" where love is remembered in the tenderest of words. Congratulations on another win for this lovely poem, Frederic. Blessings
Ashley Avatar
August 23, 2025 at 10:22 AM
Frederic, Dear Poet, Dear Friend, your romantic pen aches with the pain of a bittersweet flame whose mere touch burns the hands of time now so far behind you yet melts a heart that still beats with heat for the memories made "upon a starry hill". A beautiful love reminisced. Dual congratulations for the honors of POTW and your success in Rob's contest. I'm honored to share the podium with you, my dear poet friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Parker Avatar
August 28, 2025 at 4:30 PM
Thank you, dear poet, dear friend, I'm always honored by the kindness of your words; they always touch my heart, and I am honored to share the podium with you, dear poet, dear friend...Frederic
Woods Avatar
August 22, 2025 at 12:31 PM
Congratulations Frederic, your poem is touching! Xo
Carmack Avatar
August 22, 2025 at 11:09 AM
One way or another, I miss them all. Even the ones I didn't think I would. Your poem captured that well for me, so thanks and congrats.
Parker Avatar
August 22, 2025 at 11:29 AM
Thank you, Rob for your kindness
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August 19, 2025 at 1:47 AM
A beautiful memory in poetry. Congratulations Frederick on having received the honour of poem of the week… Beryl
Parker Avatar
August 20, 2025 at 11:01 AM
Thank you, Beryl for your kindness
Bartley Avatar
August 18, 2025 at 3:12 PM
Wow, you'ra an "ols timer" when it comes to the poetrysoup community. Hope this isn't the first time up here. Congratulations nonetheless. I'm certainly inspired to read more of your poetry.
Parker Avatar
August 20, 2025 at 11:02 AM
yes, 12 yrs, thank you for your kindness
Fowler Avatar
August 18, 2025 at 8:00 AM
Congratulations Frederick! :)
Parker Avatar
August 20, 2025 at 11:02 AM
Thank you, dear poet for your kindness
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 18, 2025 at 3:15 AM
returning, Frederick, to congratulate you on your POTW designation. Truly a beautiful romance poem.
Parker Avatar
August 20, 2025 at 11:03 AM
thank you Sara, dear poet for your kindness
Kitchin Avatar
August 18, 2025 at 3:14 AM
Frederick, beautifully penned. Congratulations on POTW.
Parker Avatar
August 20, 2025 at 11:05 AM
thank you Tania for your kindness
Andresen Avatar
August 18, 2025 at 3:03 AM
- What a poem... such a beautiful memory, Frederic :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.w.... enjoy the whole week :) - hugs
Parker Avatar
August 20, 2025 at 11:07 AM
I will Anne, it was a surprize, I've been on this site 12 yrs and I can't get my avatar on the home page...so this was a surprize, dear poet...Frederic
Nicole Avatar
August 17, 2025 at 4:22 PM
Memories are meant to linger, whether they touch our heart in a beautiful way, or in a way that leaves a sweet ache. This is filled with romance, passion and delicate moments. Congratulations Frederic, on Poem of the Week. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
Parker Avatar
August 20, 2025 at 11:08 AM
Thank you Brandy for your kindness
Anaya Avatar
August 17, 2025 at 11:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTW! Hello Fredrick, breath-taking line's of pure passion and romance. Thank you for this morn's excellent read. Enjoy the day__August blessings, I Am Anaya
Parker Avatar
August 20, 2025 at 11:09 AM
thank you Anaya for your kindness
Goldsmith Avatar
August 17, 2025 at 9:31 AM
Congratulations on your POTW win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Remembering When" write. Love your line, "Why does the memory of you haunt me so?" Many have asked this question. Have a blessed day with your win...........
Parker Avatar
August 20, 2025 at 11:10 AM
Thank you Paula for your kindness
Kaufman Avatar
August 17, 2025 at 8:57 AM
Dear Frederick, Congratulations on the honor of POTW with this passionate penning. "When we abandoned the world and laid upon a starry hill, wrapped in sighs". Awesome poem!
Parker Avatar
August 20, 2025 at 11:10 AM
Thank you Nancy for your kindness
Lane Avatar
August 17, 2025 at 6:35 AM
It's long past time for your poetry to be recognized as exquisite. Congratulations on these passionate lines being highlighted as poem of the week. Hugs to you, Frederic.
Parker Avatar
August 20, 2025 at 11:12 AM
Hugs back to you, dear poet, and I'm grateful for the kindness of your remark...Frederic
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 14, 2025 at 5:41 PM
What a gentle and engaging romance poem! The imagery in the first four lines was captivating...made me want to read on. Excellent job! wishing you a splendid evening, Sara
Manassian Avatar
August 14, 2025 at 11:51 AM
Dreamy... how romantic. Stargazing with the one you love. Nothing can beat that feeling. My favourite line? I was the flame shining on the shadow of your need. Pure genius. Thanks for your comment on Suzanne's poem. Means a lot to me.
Parker Avatar
August 20, 2025 at 11:14 AM
Dreamy...Perhaps I was thinking of you, dear poet, thank you for your kind remark...Frederic
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