Remembering Spring

A pewter mirror cracks in veins of jade,
ensconced I've been in winter's house of drear.
Aback I'm taken, palpable my fear
to see my likeness in such pallid shade.
Though loathe am I to venture still I wade
into the glass's odd virescent sphere,
while at a loss to say what brought it here
with all my apprehension thus allayed.

It's all returning clearly now for me.
Cerulean and saffron I recall
as sky and sun above a clovered lea.
I'm standing underneath a dogwood tree
and realize that spring has come to call,
replacing winter's gelid atrophy.

3/10/18

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 7/9/2018 10:00:00 PM
The absolutely awe-inspiring work of a poetic master. Breathtaking in its deep beauty, Dale. Belated congratulations for this stunning piece! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 7/10/2018 7:47:00 AM
Thanks, Susan!
Date: 4/19/2018 9:59:00 AM
Outstanding Dale
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Date: 4/19/2018 10:13:00 AM
Thanks so much, Craig!
Date: 4/18/2018 12:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful sonnet. Well done!
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Date: 4/18/2018 7:54:00 AM
Thanks, Susan.
Date: 4/17/2018 8:24:00 AM
Perfect!!
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Date: 4/17/2018 9:27:00 AM
Thank you, Madeleine.
Date: 4/17/2018 5:34:00 AM
A great sonnet, Dale, I had to read it several times to savor it a bit longer. Congrats on your well deserved first place. John
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Date: 4/17/2018 8:01:00 AM
Thanks so much, John.
Date: 4/17/2018 3:22:00 AM
FABULOUSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS my friend no wonder you took top spot:-) I'd have recognised your poem for the wonderful use of colour and imagery:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/17/2018 8:01:00 AM
Thanks, Jan!!
Date: 4/17/2018 3:17:00 AM
STUNNING! Many congrats on your first place win, Dale. Elaine
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Date: 4/17/2018 8:03:00 AM
Thank you, Elaine.
Date: 4/17/2018 1:28:00 AM
Spectacular, Dale, classic style and a great vocabulary, well done! Regards, Viv
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 4/17/2018 8:04:00 AM
Thanks very much, Viv.
Date: 4/16/2018 8:51:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Dale, wonderful write and imagery ! Hugs Eve~`*
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Date: 4/16/2018 4:15:00 PM
Back with most deserving congrats on your gold medal winner, Dale.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 4/16/2018 4:27:00 PM
Thanks again, Line!
Date: 3/22/2018 8:07:00 PM
Just wonderful!!! (another challenge I need to be getting a move on with!!) Craig is sure to love this one.
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Date: 3/22/2018 8:29:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea. This was my first try at this form.
Date: 3/18/2018 2:33:00 AM
Very picturesque phrasing ... enjoyed this imagery and flow very much. I hope to try this form one day, when I gather enough fortitude, lol. Nicely done.
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Date: 3/11/2018 12:52:00 AM
hmmm if only I could write like this...brilliant...Seren
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Date: 3/11/2018 9:06:00 AM
Thanks very much, Seren.
Date: 3/10/2018 9:13:00 PM
Beautiful imagery and melodious flow, Dale. Rip Van Winkle awakens to spring. Love it. I feel the same.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 3/11/2018 9:07:00 AM
Thanks, Line!
Date: 3/10/2018 8:06:00 PM
Wow, almost too deep for me, the imagery is so sophisticated and beautiful that I'll admit to reading it three times. This is far from a negative comment - I had to do the same with Shakespeare. Elegant depths ripple before they become clear, so to your poem. All the best ... CayCay
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Date: 3/10/2018 8:08:00 PM
Thanks, CayCay.
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