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Remembering One Red Rose

Ascended below the twilight, she wails holding his gold wedding ring- Bemoaned in darkness one red rose was left as an adored remembrance... Life without love is l o s t... Her pain and her loss reveals her forfeited fight, she bleeds for a touch from an angel's ease- U n r a v e l e d and despondent she longs to know, why he didn’t tell her... about his deadly disease. Mercy can’t mend woe- The truth wouldn’t set her free while grief led to her fate... She dies from a broken heart- On their tomb lays o n e red rose... It Takes Four - Poetry Contest Sponsor, Broken Wings Date Written: August 12, 2016

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Date: 8/24/2016 4:26:00 PM
A sorrowful write, beautifully written! Laura, congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings!
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Date: 8/23/2016 6:39:00 PM
beautiful and sad LuLoo I can see that this would appeal to Constance:-) congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/23/2016 5:14:00 AM
Congrats on your top win ...
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Date: 8/22/2016 2:22:00 PM
A heartfelt write ...Congrats on your win
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Date: 8/22/2016 2:15:00 PM
A 7 for this moving, WINNING poem, Luloo! Janice
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Date: 8/22/2016 1:05:00 PM
Laura, oh how B E A U T I F U L and congratulations on your win in my contest. I love your presentation and your image is lovely ~
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Date: 8/22/2016 12:25:00 PM
Such sadness in winning form, congratulations LuLoo...
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Date: 8/22/2016 8:34:00 AM
Congrats on your superb win 1st place. Enjoyed the read. :) Sunita
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Date: 8/21/2016 11:43:00 PM
Hi Laura, Such a good entry. Congratulations on your winning write: -) Alexis
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Date: 8/21/2016 4:39:00 PM
Such a tragic love, Laura. ;-) Who put the rose on her tomb? Also, I'm going crazy trying to figure out what "Ascended below the twilight" means. I'm rising ... below ... the twilight. Whatever -- it sounds great. Congrats!
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Date: 8/21/2016 6:01:00 PM
She was rising up (ascended) and landed just below the twilight, Sorry for the confusion. many thanks-luloo
Date: 8/21/2016 3:39:00 PM
Congrats on a great write and a great win, knew this would be a winner! Just what Constance likes!
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Date: 8/21/2016 6:02:00 PM
thank you John :)-luloo
Date: 8/16/2016 4:48:00 AM
A very sad write, Laura:) Constance will love this...
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Date: 8/21/2016 6:02:00 PM
thank you lovely Jo :)-luloo
Date: 8/13/2016 3:43:00 AM
so tragically, beautifully composed, lou!... splendid write from your pen.. soup mail and huggs
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Date: 8/13/2016 9:05:00 AM
thank you lovely Nette:) I just responded, you are very sweet :)-Luloo

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