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~ For loving memory she must depart forever lovely forever apart My lilac of beauty white satin dream in solitude and rain drops forever it seems ~

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Francis J Grasso

Date: 11/17/2016 8:34:00 AM

I love this style. Beautifully done, Rick! Congratulations! ...Fran

Constance La France

Date: 11/15/2016 9:55:00 AM

Rick BEAUTIFUL and congratulations ~

Sandra Haight

Date: 11/15/2016 9:22:00 AM

So sadly beautiful, Rick. Congratulations on your fine win. Sandra

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/14/2016 9:57:00 PM

Congrats, Rick!

Afzal Nusker

Date: 9/18/2016 10:33:00 PM

Fabulous poem. Congrats on your win, Rick.

Lu Loo

Date: 9/18/2016 5:59:00 PM

Rick, once again, stole my heart with this one...had to be on the list :) congratulations on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/3/2016 4:38:00 AM

This beautiful piece has a haunting sadness Rick. Congratulations on your top placement! 7 ; )

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 8/30/2016 3:36:00 AM

Congratulations. 'Great' sadness. Kai

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/29/2016 1:16:00 PM

Hi Rick, Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 8/29/2016 12:32:00 PM

Agree with Agnes as said "so much in so few" words. Wonderful. Congrats on your win. :) Sunita

Agnes Krampe

Date: 8/29/2016 11:18:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Rick. Love how you expressed so much in so few words.

Lu Loo

Date: 8/29/2016 10:05:00 AM

Rick..firstly the flow is remarkable and you said so much in such few words...congrats on your top placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo

Elaine George

Date: 6/26/2014 8:20:00 PM

Breathtakingly beautiful, Rick. One for my Fav list. bfn Elaine

Joann Grisetti

Date: 7/17/2012 8:17:00 AM

Dripping with beauty.Congratulations.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/14/2012 12:33:00 PM

A very lovely poem and a deserving win Rick. Congratulations!

David Williams

Date: 6/13/2012 7:12:00 AM

Rick congrats on your win..David

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/12/2012 9:58:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in Brian's "# 182" contest ^Rick. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/11/2012 10:01:00 PM

So beautiful. I think I had not seen it before. Thank heavens for these contests. Congrats, Rick!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/11/2012 3:18:00 PM

who would not love a man who could feel this way? Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/11/2012 1:02:00 PM

rick, a nice wonderful win in Brian's contest... xox~ pd

Terry O'Leary

Date: 6/11/2012 10:53:00 AM

Congrats on your HM for your fine poem... Terry

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/11/2012 8:04:00 AM

So emotional...a beauty this is, and so sad. Ps....many many thanks Rick, for the honor of your recent contest......I'm so pleased you liked my entry, and very grateful for the praise! Thank you!!

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer

Date: 6/4/2012 10:14:00 PM

Nice flow to this Rick! Beautiful way you put the words together.