Paul Callus Poet Free verse

Relationships

[Gogyohka Poetry Form]

When relationships
Drop below freezing point
Frost causes a cold-war
A solution to be found
In the warmth of mediation


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Bite Size Poem #35 Poetry Contest
Hosted by Line Gauthier
         Placed 1st
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Line Gauthier November 12, 2022 at 2:44 PM Much truth found here, Paul ~ Paul Callus November 13, 2022 at 1:53 PM Thank you, Line. Hopr you're keeping well. Regards // paul

Valsa George August 2, 2022 at 7:50 PM When relationships go haywire, look into oneself, its causes and solutions can be easily found ! A very profound thought, Paul Paul Callus August 5, 2022 at 9:47 AM Thank you for the insightful comments, Valsa. Have a lovely weekend! // paul

Jack Horne March 8, 2022 at 7:19 AM love this one, Paul - so pleased to see it got a 1st place win in a contest Paul Callus May 5, 2022 at 9:30 AM Thank you, Jack. Best regards // paul

Lindsay Laurie February 21, 2022 at 3:01 PM Hello Paul ... very nice indeed and a fitting solution - thank you Paul - Lindsay Paul Callus May 5, 2022 at 9:29 AM Thank you, my friend. Hope you are keeping well. Regards // paul

Kim Rodrigues February 18, 2022 at 6:18 AM Enjoyed very much! Congratulations! Paul Callus February 20, 2022 at 1:05 PM Thank you, Kim. Best regards // paul

Debra L Brown February 17, 2022 at 1:24 PM Hi! Paul , I enjoyed your poem. I loved how you use temperture related words. Cleaver. Good luck in the contest. Blessing ~ Debra Paul Callus February 17, 2022 at 1:27 PM Thank you for coming back with more insightful comments, Debra. Regards & goodnight // paul

Alexis Y. February 16, 2022 at 3:39 PM Wow! Paul, I wrote a poem on the same subject and like yours much better-Alexis Paul Callus February 17, 2022 at 1:34 PM I'm sure your poem is equally good, Alexis :) Thank you for stopping by, my friend. // paul

Swetha Vangaveti February 16, 2022 at 7:54 AM Wah!! So much said in so little piece! Paul Callus February 17, 2022 at 1:25 PM Thank you Swetha. Regards // paul

Delice Arleen Skelly February 16, 2022 at 2:59 AM This was definitely a winner, first rate image Paul...Delice Paul Callus February 17, 2022 at 1:17 PM Thank you for the lovely comments, Delice. Goodnight :) // paul

Debra L Brown February 15, 2022 at 10:44 AM Paul, Your poem was outstanding. It was a well deserve win. Blessings ~ Debra Paul Callus February 17, 2022 at 1:14 PM Thank you, Debra. Blessings and goodnight // paul

Len Gasun February 14, 2022 at 10:39 PM Congratulations for your win and this awesome write my dear friend, Paul. I strongly agree on the message. Thank you for sharing. Have a wonderful day. Paul Callus February 15, 2022 at 7:00 AM Thank you for the lovely complimentary comments, Len. Best regards // paul

Constance La France February 13, 2022 at 3:12 PM Paul, congratulations on your First Place win, wonderful poem, a interesting form ~ Constance Paul Callus February 15, 2022 at 6:56 AM Thank you, Constance. This form is a simplified version of a Tanka; quite popular outside Soup confines. ~ Regards // paul

Paula Goldsmith February 13, 2022 at 7:40 AM Congratulations on your win. "Wonderful" and so true. Love It. Have a blessed day/week to come................... Paul Callus February 15, 2022 at 6:54 AM Thank you, Paula. May you too enjoy a lovely and productive week. Blessings // paul

Bill Baker February 12, 2022 at 10:50 PM A compromise is always possible in the presence of Love. Enjoyed your poem, Paul. Bill Paul Callus February 15, 2022 at 6:48 AM Thank you, Bill. Pleased to make your acquaintance. Regards // paul

Unseeking Seeker February 12, 2022 at 8:42 PM Gogyokha … interesting form, wonder why it’s not listed on PS? Congrats on your win, Paul, indeed the vibrancy of silence whispers love inked secrets to our heart, which narrow mind cannot cognise Paul Callus February 14, 2022 at 6:14 AM Thank you for your insightful feedback. ~ Although Gogyohka is not listed on Soup, it is a very popular form, and there are international sites dedicated solely to it. ~ Regards // paul

Delice Arleen Skelly February 10, 2022 at 1:45 PM A captivating bite size poem…Delice Paul Callus February 14, 2022 at 5:00 AM Thank you Delice. Enjoy the week ahead! // paul

Tom Cunningham February 7, 2022 at 1:20 AM Love the metaphors in your verse Paul, hope you are keeping well. Tom Paul Callus February 8, 2022 at 4:30 AM Thank you for reading and liking, Tom. So far keeping in good shape :) Regards // paul

Darlene De Beaulieu February 6, 2022 at 12:36 PM Hello Paul, yes meditation is the solution for the warmth. Regards Darlene. Darlene De Beaulieu February 8, 2022 at 10:51 AM Hello Paul, thank you. regards Darlene. Paul Callus February 8, 2022 at 4:28 AM Thank you for stopping by, Darlene. Have a lovely day. Regards // paul

Connie Marcum Wong February 6, 2022 at 11:49 AM Diplomacy may go a long way. I enjoyed the metaphors in your poem Paul. I am praying for the best outcome. This is a splendid poem my friend. Blessings xxoo Paul Callus February 8, 2022 at 4:27 AM Thank you for the lovely feedback, Connie. Always a pleasure to have you visiting:) Regards & Blessings // paul

Vijay Pandit February 6, 2022 at 5:24 AM Yes, it becomes a cold war. Introspection can always help to seek within. Paul Callus February 8, 2022 at 4:23 AM Thank you for the visit and comments, Vijay. Regards // paul