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Regrets

So many moments of my life have passed. Some gone without a recognizing nod. Without a thought that one could be the last, They were discarded on the thankless ground, As though a message had been sent by God Assuring me that more were coming round. I could have used more wisely than I did Amounts of time I simply chose to waste. Today I'd save it in a pot with lid. I was a carefree girl with artless schemes. All those lost moments could have been embraced To be here now to help fulfill my dreams. So many moments of my life have passed I could have used more wisely than I did. Written in Iambic pentameter

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/21/2014 7:56:00 PM
Wonderfully crafted poem with superb message.
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Date: 4/17/2014 11:33:00 PM
What a well-crafted, imagistic poem. Inspiring--and all too relatable. Happy Easter, and drop by anytime. Mel :)
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Date: 4/12/2014 7:54:00 AM
ACongratulations joyce!!! Reflective pen this is:) nice-- olive_eloi thanking you for your visits
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Date: 4/12/2014 4:03:00 AM
Everyone has regrets in life, but what a beautiful way to depict Joyce , congrats on ur great win !
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Date: 4/11/2014 10:36:00 PM
JOYCE, THIS IS A SWEET WIN... LUV ~SKAT~
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Date: 4/11/2014 9:31:00 PM
Joyce, a wonderful win... XOX~ Linda
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Date: 4/11/2014 7:26:00 PM
Your title for this one is perfect, Joyce. What a dreamy way to write about regrets. Big congrats for your win.
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Date: 4/11/2014 5:18:00 PM
Great winning work..Way to go..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 4/11/2014 1:27:00 PM
And how true your words, and exquisite. Congrats on your win
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Date: 4/8/2014 2:55:00 PM
Dear Joyce, Sadly, we all have times when we regret the way we used our time. I like to picture you as "a carefree girl," but you are definitely an artist. Such a beautiful sonnet, dear. It touched my soul. Love, Carolyn
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