Refuge

The dilapidated, gutted apartment buildings loom like grotesque gravestones, jutting from the desolate cityscape. Chaos rains from the heavens, disturbing the dead and terrifying the living, taking refuge in bombed-out basements and shelters dug into refuse piles. Many have fled their homes, forced to abandon their city and their country, seeking refuge in foreign lands. War is hell; there is no politically correct way to describe or justify the atrocities it inflicts upon people or the complete devastation it brings. Humanity has an ugly side, a deep-rooted predilection for war: it's in our nature. We can try to hide or run away, but there is no safe place where war cannot find us, for it follows us wherever we go, like a shadow.

the shadow of war overwhelms the light of hope... blinded by a tear
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Andresen Avatar
April 7, 2023 at 12:27 PM
- Congratulations on your first place in the contest - Scary shadows without hope, Emile - Excellent writing - hugs
Pinet Avatar
April 7, 2023 at 3:25 PM
Thanks, Sunshine, as always, I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Fowler Avatar
April 7, 2023 at 7:49 AM
Wow Emile. This is a fabulous haibun and so aptly stated my friend. Congratulations on your win! :)
Pinet Avatar
April 7, 2023 at 9:29 AM
Thanks, Linda, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
La France Avatar
April 6, 2023 at 8:16 PM
Emile, outstanding writing and thank you for sharing your poem in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
Pinet Avatar
April 7, 2023 at 6:29 AM
Thanks, Constance, I appreciate the placement and your comments, my friend, Emile.
M  Avatar
April 5, 2023 at 8:31 AM
Powerful write Emile…humanity does have an ugly side unfortunately creating war , death and destruction being a big one!! Debx
Pinet Avatar
April 7, 2023 at 6:30 AM
Thanks, Deb, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Peck Avatar
April 4, 2023 at 11:47 AM
The world has become a sad place; war is only about humans killing other humans and greed: senseless. Your haibun tells the sad tale beautifully, though.
Pinet Avatar
April 4, 2023 at 2:16 PM
Thanks, Ann, I echo your sentiments "The world has become a sad place"...and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Bell Avatar
April 4, 2023 at 10:15 AM
War, what a bloody waste of time, works for no one.
Pinet Avatar
April 4, 2023 at 10:55 AM
Thanks, Paul, I totally agree, war is a bloody waste of time...I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
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