Reflections

It  seems these portals I stroll past, mark passing glances
         in some calculated reveal. All at once, morphing to a silvered 
           window, reflecting between two worlds. A glance, becomes 
                       a stare, becomes a shift in perception.


                                         hallway mirror
                              transcended by passing years…
                                       my father’s face
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Kendrick Avatar
December 24, 2015 at 10:50 AM
Scary revelation(that is we are aging)..Enjoyed reading your winning work..Congrats..Sara
A   Avatar
December 20, 2015 at 7:21 PM
David, Congrats on your Haibun Free-Style win. ~LINDA~
Thirtyseven Avatar
December 20, 2015 at 11:57 AM
This is a great idea, and you have placed because I look upon your finishing poem as a senru, as I had asked for anything other than haiku's to end the Haibuns. It is a close call though. Great work, and thanks for entering my contest.
A  Avatar
December 20, 2015 at 11:10 AM
DAVID, Congratulations on your Haibun Free-Styled win. WUV **SKAT**
Lane Avatar
November 15, 2015 at 2:59 AM
You are your father's son. Nice Haibun, David.
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