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A mother’s eyes see a pin on the floor, a teardrop from a distance, look down the hollow of a newborn mouth beholding its yearning for life From "A Mother's Eyes" 2/7/2021 9/1/2021 Liberum Divisa 7 Poetry Contest

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Date: 11/2/2021 11:19:00 AM
Janis, delightful reflection of motherhood! Congratulations on your win! Sending you blessings.
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Date: 11/1/2021 8:03:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, making me nostalgic of my darling MOM. God bless you.
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Date: 11/1/2021 11:45:00 AM
wonderful message in this poem, Janis. Congrats on the win
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Date: 11/1/2021 6:39:00 AM
Janis, beautiful and congratulations on your contest win ~ friendship and poetry _Constance
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Date: 10/31/2021 6:14:00 AM
Congratulations, Janis! Beautifully expressed! ...Fran
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Date: 10/31/2021 12:46:00 AM
Moving, heartfelt, the reality slightly chilling, well done, excellent work.
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Date: 10/30/2021 7:12:00 PM
The depth and meaning here are just wonderful - they carry a weight without being obtrusive, which is not easily done. I really enjoyed this, Janis, congratulations on your fourth place win! Blessings! (I can't believe this and David's have no comments - ugh!). - the bard
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