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"I am the light of the world. He who follows Me shall not walk in darkness, but have the light of life. John 8:12 _ Bible My Journey Into I Am That I Am I have been a lucky girl in this life, have been taught morals and coping ability: even though I have felt life's knife, I have no greed, envy, malice- only civility; and control anger and fear with tranquility. It takes years but I can now transcend, from my outer self into my inner self that hides: and as a tree in the mighty wind I bend, releasing a character flaw as a leaf that glides; and in enlightenment there are many guides. My journey to I am has been long, and I work each day at letting go of the past: knowing sorrow made me strong, I want the now and not- what has long passed; because there is beauty everywhere so vast. So, I put the pictures of the dead, within a chest to rest where I can often go: and love lays in this memory bed, and then, I close the lid on all my former woe; and to people and new moments I now say hello ! ________________ April 30, 2023 Poetry/Quintain (English)/Refining Consciousness Copyright Protected, ID 04-1543-813-30 All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France Written for the Premiere contest, Redefining Consciousness sponsor, Unseeking Seeker, Judged 05/04/2023 First Place (Trophy)

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Date: 5/6/2023 8:22:00 PM
"I work each day at letting go of the past" - Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/6/2023 8:36:00 PM
Christuraj, thank you so much for the comment, compliment and congratulations !
Date: 5/6/2023 2:11:00 PM
This is so lovely, Constance, especially your last stanza. If only we could all learn to let the past go and "to people and new moments I now say hello." Congratulations on First Place!
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Date: 5/6/2023 7:36:00 PM
Ann, thank you so much for the compliment (yes I love that stanza too and it is true) and also for the congratulations !
Date: 5/6/2023 12:38:00 PM
Congrats Constance on a wonderful poem for the contest. Each stanza rings true!
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Date: 5/6/2023 7:37:00 PM
David, thank you so much for the congrats and compliment !
Date: 5/6/2023 2:10:00 AM
Dear Constance, for years I've read your poetry and the heartache inside of you has always manifested itself as if each word is a teardrop falling on a page. This win recognizes your pain and you writing talent.
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Date: 5/6/2023 8:25:00 AM
Lin, thank you so much for the lovely comment and compliment on my poem and my writing, appreciate !
Date: 5/6/2023 12:27:00 AM
"... and love lays in this memory bed" Wow. What a wonderful poem, certainly deserving of the First Place win! Constance, this poem really touched my heart. A Fav+ for me. Congratulations. Carol Louise
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Date: 5/6/2023 8:26:00 AM
Carol, thank you so much for the nice comment, compliment, congratulations and FAV !
Date: 5/5/2023 10:23:00 AM
Congratulations on an excellent write. Captures well a transitional all should pursue.
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Date: 5/6/2023 8:27:00 AM
David, thank you so much for the comment, compliment and congratulations !
Date: 5/5/2023 8:35:00 AM
So well-deserved Constance! Remember me with smiles not tears for all the joy through all the years. Congratulations on your trophy win!
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Date: 5/6/2023 8:28:00 AM
Anaya, thank you so much for the compliment, comment and congratulations !
Date: 5/5/2023 6:52:00 AM
Great work, Constance. Congrats are well due. Too few of us are able to see yesterday for its worth and kiss today.
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Date: 5/6/2023 8:28:00 AM
Curtis, thank you so much for the comment, compliment and congrats !
Date: 5/5/2023 1:43:00 AM
Amazing writing. I just love this poem. LOVE IT so.. Congrats to you and God bless you too sweet friend. Love, Gina
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Date: 5/6/2023 8:29:00 AM
Gina, thank you so much for the comment, compliment, and congrats, blessings and love !
Date: 5/4/2023 9:27:00 AM
Living with sad memories of the past is not going to give us any gain, but will only destroy our calm. So let us learn to embrace the present moments. Indeed sorrows can make us strong. So see your losses as a blessing in a way. Great resolve to face life with strength. Indeed a lovely poem, dear Constance.
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Date: 5/4/2023 2:37:00 PM
Valsa, thank you so much for the wonderful comment and the compliment !
Date: 4/30/2023 4:30:00 PM
"Love lays in a memory bed." I find that to be a comforting phrase. My well wishes for the contest, Constance.
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Date: 5/1/2023 1:53:00 AM
Lin, thank you so much for the compliment and encouragement !
Date: 4/30/2023 3:33:00 PM
Nice to see your journey is paying huge dividends. I should be so lucky but... there's still time. Well written my friend.
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Date: 5/1/2023 1:54:00 AM
David, thank you so much for the comment and compliment, yes there is still time !
Date: 4/30/2023 3:12:00 PM
A beautiful poem, Constance. Your mental imagery and thoughts are both very relevant and beautifully stated. Best of luck to you in the contest!
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Date: 5/1/2023 1:54:00 AM
Sotto, thank you so much for the compliment, comment and encouragement !
Date: 4/30/2023 1:58:00 PM
A lovely write from a lovely writer. Enjoy your day/week.............
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Date: 4/30/2023 2:15:00 PM
Paula, thank you so much for the compliment on my poem and my writing !

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