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Premiere Contest WinnerRefining Consciousness

 
"I am the light of the world. He who follows Me shall not walk in darkness, but have the light of life. John 8:12 _ Bible My Journey Into I Am That I Am I have been a lucky girl in this life, have been taught morals and coping ability: even though I have felt life's knife, I have no greed, envy, malice- only civility; and control anger and fear with tranquility. It takes years but I can now transcend, from my outer self into my inner self that hides: and as a tree in the mighty wind I bend, releasing a character flaw as a leaf that glides; and in enlightenment there are many guides. My journey to I am has been long, and I work each day at letting go of the past: knowing sorrow made me strong, I want the now and not- what has long passed; because there is beauty everywhere so vast. So, I put the pictures of the dead, within a chest to rest where I can often go: and love lays in this memory bed, and then, I close the lid on all my former woe; and to people and new moments I now say hello ! ________________ April 30, 2023 Poetry/Quintain (English)/Refining Consciousness Copyright Protected, ID 04-1543-813-30 All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France Written for the Premiere contest, Redefining Consciousness sponsor, Unseeking Seeker, Judged 05/04/2023 First Place (Trophy)
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Alex Avatar
May 6, 2023 at 8:22 PM
"I work each day at letting go of the past" - Beautifully written. Congratulations!
La France Avatar
May 6, 2023 at 8:36 PM
Christuraj, thank you so much for the comment, compliment and congratulations !
Peck Avatar
May 6, 2023 at 2:11 PM
This is so lovely, Constance, especially your last stanza. If only we could all learn to let the past go and "to people and new moments I now say hello." Congratulations on First Place!
La France Avatar
May 6, 2023 at 7:36 PM
Ann, thank you so much for the compliment (yes I love that stanza too and it is true) and also for the congratulations !
Fisher Avatar
May 6, 2023 at 12:38 PM
Congrats Constance on a wonderful poem for the contest. Each stanza rings true!
La France Avatar
May 6, 2023 at 7:37 PM
David, thank you so much for the congrats and compliment !
Lane Avatar
May 6, 2023 at 2:10 AM
Dear Constance, for years I've read your poetry and the heartache inside of you has always manifested itself as if each word is a teardrop falling on a page. This win recognizes your pain and you writing talent.
La France Avatar
May 6, 2023 at 8:25 AM
Lin, thank you so much for the lovely comment and compliment on my poem and my writing, appreciate !
Drowley Avatar
May 5, 2023 at 10:23 AM
Congratulations on an excellent write. Captures well a transitional all should pursue.
La France Avatar
May 6, 2023 at 8:27 AM
David, thank you so much for the comment, compliment and congratulations !
Anaya Avatar
May 5, 2023 at 8:35 AM
So well-deserved Constance! Remember me with smiles not tears for all the joy through all the years. Congratulations on your trophy win!
La France Avatar
May 6, 2023 at 8:28 AM
Anaya, thank you so much for the compliment, comment and congratulations !
Johnson Avatar
May 5, 2023 at 6:52 AM
Great work, Constance. Congrats are well due. Too few of us are able to see yesterday for its worth and kiss today.
La France Avatar
May 6, 2023 at 8:28 AM
Curtis, thank you so much for the comment, compliment and congrats !
Mcintosh Avatar
May 5, 2023 at 1:43 AM
Amazing writing. I just love this poem. LOVE IT so.. Congrats to you and God bless you too sweet friend. Love, Gina
La France Avatar
May 6, 2023 at 8:29 AM
Gina, thank you so much for the comment, compliment, and congrats, blessings and love !
George Avatar
May 4, 2023 at 9:27 AM
Living with sad memories of the past is not going to give us any gain, but will only destroy our calm. So let us learn to embrace the present moments. Indeed sorrows can make us strong. So see your losses as a blessing in a way. Great resolve to face life with strength. Indeed a lovely poem, dear Constance.
La France Avatar
May 4, 2023 at 2:37 PM
Valsa, thank you so much for the wonderful comment and the compliment !
Lane Avatar
April 30, 2023 at 4:30 PM
"Love lays in a memory bed." I find that to be a comforting phrase. My well wishes for the contest, Constance.
La France Avatar
May 1, 2023 at 1:53 AM
Lin, thank you so much for the compliment and encouragement !
Mchattie Avatar
April 30, 2023 at 3:33 PM
Nice to see your journey is paying huge dividends. I should be so lucky but... there's still time. Well written my friend.
La France Avatar
May 1, 2023 at 1:54 AM
David, thank you so much for the comment and compliment, yes there is still time !
Poet Avatar
April 30, 2023 at 3:12 PM
A beautiful poem, Constance. Your mental imagery and thoughts are both very relevant and beautifully stated. Best of luck to you in the contest!
La France Avatar
May 1, 2023 at 1:54 AM
Sotto, thank you so much for the compliment, comment and encouragement !
Goldsmith Avatar
April 30, 2023 at 1:58 PM
A lovely write from a lovely writer. Enjoy your day/week.............
La France Avatar
April 30, 2023 at 2:15 PM
Paula, thank you so much for the compliment on my poem and my writing !
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