Red Sun

**Sun Tan**

Forceful ray printing dark skin
Sunbathe, aquarium sky
Peaceful trace beautiful line 
Sun comes alive
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**Hourglass Horizon**

We sit embracing sweet time
Beautiful amber lit eyes
Red dawn mist, loving moment
Holding mommy's hand
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7-5-13
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Thirtyseven Avatar
July 24, 2014 at 8:22 AM
I came in search of a new poem, your getting slower at posting than I am. Then I found this 'ere gem. Love that first image of sun printing... What a wonderful way with words you have.
Dietrich Avatar
July 3, 2014 at 7:58 AM
PD. I could have sworn it was EG that wrote that poem for you. But I went to her stuff and do not see a poem that looks like it could be the one I saw. Either she took it down or I got the author wrong! I was sure it was a newer poem and I just checked her new ones. It could have been someone else and maybe she commented on it and I confused her name with the real author because she made a comment?? I will see if I can find my own comment in an outbox but probably it scrolled off by now!!!
Fraser Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 2:21 PM
Sweet delightful poetry Linda, a joy to read this Monday evening, James....
Callus Avatar
May 6, 2014 at 2:12 PM
Both writes are beautiful Linda. One advantage of short poems is that I can read them over and over again...enjoy them and squeeze every drop out of them. // paul
Dietrich Avatar
March 23, 2014 at 11:29 AM
PD. just revisiting these. I do love sunny poems.
Kitchens Avatar
March 17, 2014 at 11:34 PM
Linda, your word choices and description are both very unique. Those two factors make your work interesting to read.
Dua Avatar
December 11, 2013 at 11:05 AM
Beautiful , and I just imagined all of it , and felt how wonderful and peaceful it would be ! Thanks for your inspiring comments on my poems ! Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us ! Love <3 , Saanvi .....: ))
Gasun Avatar
November 4, 2013 at 9:28 AM
Good evening my dearest sis! Are you @ work now? Thank u so much for your lovely messages in my poem "Seventh" . So sorry if I just replied now. Was @ school & I arrived late this evening. Thanks for appreciating my new avatar/pix;)) taken @Jordan. By the way, our time is still the same here. Now is 10.30 pm . It's a morning there, right? Good morning & big hugs! I also came & peeked at my latest contest w/c hopefully to be judged this wkend. Goodnyt now! Thanks 4 evrything! Tcare! lovem4evrLeo
Manassian Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 1:44 PM
Read this again...BEAUTIFUL BEAUTIFUL BEAUTIFUL, PD! :) BTW...honey, please go back to my poem and read my responses to your comments....LOVE ME! :) Hugs!
Cavanaugh Avatar
September 11, 2013 at 7:26 AM
You do very well at these. and "aquarium sky" that's awesome. Bravo!
Mcdaid Avatar
August 25, 2013 at 4:14 PM
a very beautiful piece of writing I wrote one myself next year four back to back red moon check it out with two eclipses in the sky I called it coming signs its very interesting I happened to find it by sheer luck thought I would write something about it before the actual event a piece of history
Dua Avatar
August 21, 2013 at 3:41 AM
WoW Linda ..............I wish I was a writer like you !! Stunning and beautiful work !! .........xoxo~Saanvi :)))
W Avatar
August 20, 2013 at 8:24 AM
"We sit embracing sweet time" --I LOVE this line.
Azam Shah Bukhari Avatar
August 19, 2013 at 1:17 PM
Congrats-- Very beautifully expressed. Brilliant attempt.
Newman Avatar
August 8, 2013 at 3:01 AM
Excellent love this one, great writer love the line sunbathe aquarium sky, beautifully worded, have a blessed day, hugs sueellen
Dietrich Avatar
August 5, 2013 at 3:20 PM
Hi, PD. I bet this won in the contest so I am here to say a big congrats. I see someone congratulated you. Awesome!
Gasun Avatar
August 3, 2013 at 6:56 PM
Hi, my evrdearest sis! Sending you my big sweet hugs, smiles w/kisses! It's nice waking up earlier this Sun. a.m. reading once again 1 of the phenomenal writes of my loveliest & #1 fav. & greatest poet. So love the glow of the sun which lit your lovely moments.. embracing it tight. I'm sorry I’ve missed to see the winners list ahead of time. Nevertheless, I'm sending my WARMEST HEARTY b-lated CONGRATS on your super win! Thank you so much for your reply & lovely comments on my poem, the chance to join the next contest as well ;) It’s esp. a great relief to hear from you. Hoping you’ll get better soon my dearest sis. Keep sending you all my loving thoughts, prayers & lovely hugs ok. I'm always w/ u. Yes, I wish you'll be w/ me one time in my vac., how about visiting me here & my turn next time there?:)). Take care always! Have a blessed wkend to you & ur family. Lovem4evr,Leo
Bono Avatar
July 30, 2013 at 12:13 PM
Sending prayers and comfort to you and family. Are you doing ok? If you need to talk you know how to get a hold of me. Thinking of you and your sister. Stay strong like I know you are. Love Colleen
Mohammed Avatar
July 30, 2013 at 8:03 AM
I liked this one Linda and may I say that your poem add sunshine to my day.
A  Avatar
July 25, 2013 at 2:32 PM
..... .... congrats *****SKAT
Jones Avatar
July 24, 2013 at 7:50 PM
I really love embracing sweet time...among the whole.....awesome Linda...congratulations
Jones Avatar
July 24, 2013 at 7:55 PM
Sorry it took so long to comment...been cutting up two downed trees all day from yet more horrible storms here last night....I live between okc and Tulsa...we had between 70-80 mile winds...said I don't have enough to do already...haha...take care...glad you are OK from your wreck....thank God!
Anglesey Avatar
July 23, 2013 at 6:08 PM
Really enjoyed the sweet imagery in the second stanza. Your poem is vibrant. Congratulations on your win :)
Devnath  Avatar
July 23, 2013 at 12:33 PM
Congrats on your win, my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
Minardi Avatar
July 23, 2013 at 9:33 AM
A very good poetry, P.D. I love how you connect the sun with your memories (or i think it is -holding mommy's hand).
Lasisi Avatar
July 17, 2013 at 4:33 PM
Though I am new here but seeing your writing,I feel like you are a messiah sent to save with poetry..You have seduced my heart with such becoming natural erotic scenes
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