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red stained leaves falling outside my window burnt orange, gold, and red floating down like swirling dancers listening, I hear their weeping and whispering grief of withering away and decaying beneath the winter snow . . . I gather the fragile colors to my heart in their final sigh to press between the pages of my written words so that in the cold of winter I can open to that page and behold but when I do- they are brittle dead and falling apart . . . ____________________________ March 12, 2019 Poetry/Free Verse/'red stained leaves falling' Copyright Protected, ID 19- 1123-179-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to the contest, 'red stained leaves falling' sponsor, Brian Strand First Place

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Date: 3/13/2019 9:05:00 AM
An emotional journey in this beautiful piece Constance. Congratulations on your very deserving First Placement! : ) xxoo
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Constance La France
Date: 3/13/2019 11:06:00 AM
Connie, thanks so much for the compliment and the congratulations , appreciate ~
Date: 3/13/2019 1:51:00 AM
Excellent. A great entry with well penned.
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Date: 3/13/2019 11:06:00 AM
Ravi, thanks for the excellent ~
Date: 3/12/2019 9:17:00 PM
To me this is alliteration at her finest, my friend. " weeping and whispering grief of withering away and decaying beneath the winter snow . . . " Beautiful!
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Date: 3/13/2019 11:07:00 AM
Caren, thanks for the beautiful and the compliment ~
Date: 3/12/2019 6:13:00 PM
wow, were we supposed to do a poem on that theme. Oh gosh, I simply entered any old poem without reading !! I better go see. For SURE, this is a winner!!!
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Date: 3/12/2019 7:39:00 PM
Andrea, thanks for visiting, no we did not have to do that theme, I just did, but you do have to write only 8 lines ~
Date: 3/12/2019 1:11:00 PM
Great entry Dear Heart, best wishes...
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Date: 3/12/2019 3:59:00 PM
Charlie, thanks so much for visiting ~

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