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Red Poppy

Red poppies, Is it safe to walk across your chattel? Shadows pace your blood-red opium lusciousness. You're charismatic pulsating red hue, Intoxicating under the rising dawn And quiet golden yellow honey. Are they asleep? Or, Are they heaving the dead From the shadow of battle? Shadows hunt your sweetness, Drifting beyond rest in empty silence. You don't let them go; You drag them off In your undertow Relieving their pain, Dulling their senses. Red poppies, Is it safe to walk across your chattel? 4/14/2020
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Johnson Avatar
April 16, 2020 at 8:43 AM
Congrats, Eve. The field of red poppies is simply beyond beautiful. I think the piece is remarkable.
Dietrich Avatar
April 14, 2020 at 3:52 PM
wow, such a profound and lovely remembrance, Eve. Very well done!
Babcock Avatar
April 14, 2020 at 2:47 PM
A reminder and tribute to the ones who gave their life for us. Well penned, love phyl
Ball Avatar
April 14, 2020 at 6:55 AM
Oh well done. I can imagine walking through a field of poppies and remembering the brave soldiers who gave their lives for us. Love the pic. It's perfect. God Bless, JB
Cunningham Avatar
April 14, 2020 at 2:56 AM
A reminder of the glorious dead, always makes me think of the flanders field poem. Tom
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April 14, 2020 at 2:27 AM
Beautifully phrased though in a sad way. I know they're stunning flowers yet devastating too. Also, it reminded me of another poppy poem which I love, that is :- "In Flanders Fields" is a war poem in the form of a rondeau, written during the First World War by Canadian physician Lieutenant-Colonel John McCrae. True it has nothing to do with each other. I liked your version very much.
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April 14, 2020 at 2:13 AM
What a powerful write, dear. Makes one wonder...about all those who gave life for country. Brave men...poppies..a constant reminder.
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