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'red Lips - No Action'

a piece of paper covered with red lips 
promising a night of moving hips 
like a passionate pledge
it drove him close to the edge
a pity they couldn’t undo the zips



Contest: Valentine's Day Limerick
6th Place

funnyvalentines daylimerick

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Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 11/18/2011 5:09:00 PM

this one is so funny Wilma. Loved it Great limerick

James Fraser

Date: 1/27/2011 2:28:00 PM

Many congrats Wilma on your fine win in Francine's contest with this GEM....:)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/27/2011 9:38:00 AM

Congratulations Wilma on your win in Francine's contest "Valentine's Day Limerick". Love, Carol

Steven Henderson

Date: 1/26/2011 5:54:00 PM

Brought a smile to my face! Steve

Elaine George

Date: 1/26/2011 4:10:00 PM

AWESOME! Wilma, Congrat's on your big win, Lainie

John Freeman

Date: 1/26/2011 8:58:00 AM

Congratulations Wilma on your worthy poem's honored place. Agape, Moses

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/26/2011 1:46:00 AM

Nice write. Congratulations on winning with it.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 1/25/2011 10:27:00 PM

Copngratulaitons on your win, Wilma. Love, Joyce

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/25/2011 9:56:00 PM

Glad to see this one on the winners' list. A big congratulations to you, WIlma, you limerick writing fool. hahaha. LUv, Andrea ps and I love how you made yours naughty.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/25/2011 7:37:00 PM

Congrats Wilma on your super special win in the Valentine Day contest .. we knew these red lips would fascinate luv... enjoy another sweet success my friend..with luv..

Tahera Mannan

Date: 1/25/2011 7:34:00 PM

Tons of congrats for this great win.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/25/2011 7:19:00 PM

Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Wilma

Francine Roberts

Date: 1/25/2011 6:18:00 PM

congrats Wilma on your sixth place win in my Valentines day contest

Kris Walters

Date: 1/23/2011 5:43:00 PM

Oh, hmm... it's always something!! Very clever limerick! Hugs, kris~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/23/2011 2:44:00 PM

he he he! wow what a gripping smile.. i think its funny.. almost happended to me.. my oppsy when things could not get unzipped... was silly like this... thanks for the laugh...take care,..p.d.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 1/23/2011 9:56:00 AM

Scissors!! Scissors!! I told you, you should always have a pair of scissors on hand, Missy :p-- you never listen to me! I actually bought 3 pairs yesterday- reckon I send one to you now?? hahaha this is such a funny limerick, Wilma :) hope your Sunday treated you good or is it the other way around? hugs to you! PS. Scissors!! :D

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/22/2011 8:56:00 PM

LOL! Terrific one, Wilma!! Poor guy..frustrated! Good one! Hope you're having fun! Love, Annalise

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/22/2011 5:02:00 PM

Awesome , Original, Unique Wilma.. great rhyme in these lines and a fun twist at the end.. if for the contest good luck my friend.. still smiling naughtily..haha..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/22/2011 2:46:00 PM

Hey, what ?? hahaha. Funny one, WIlma!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/22/2011 2:31:00 PM

First two lines made me smile and but the last made me roar with laughter, Wilma